Urdu Poetry Forum

**Y.R** · #1 06-30-2007, 09:41 PM

::::Yeah Din Rat Milna:::::

**~*Amna*~** · #2 06-30-2007, 10:05 PM

Buhat Achay Yasir

**shoog** · #3 07-01-2007, 12:22 AM

Bahut hi khobsurat Yasir
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**sohailmalik64** · #4 07-01-2007, 01:32 PM

Yasir Sahib aap kay kalam maiN zubaan aur bayan ki kuch buniyadi ghaletiaN haiN un per mehnet ker kay unhaiN dur kernay ki koshish kijiay.

aap ki ghazal maiN buniyaadi mosiqiet aur rawani ka fuqdaan hay

aap ki ghazal maiN alfaaz akser ghalet istemaal huay haiN. maClan gawara, shumarah, sanwarah, isteaarah, sahara... yeh alfaaz ya to ghalet imla kay saath aye haiN ya ghalet mafhoom ya ghalet terkeeb maiN. achai shaeri kay liay sab say pehlay zuban ki buniyaadi ghaltiaN dur honi chahihaiN. phir behr aur rawani ki darustegi.

ager aap sanjeedgi say koshish keraiN gay to yaqeenan behteri ho gi. is bazm maiN kai dostoN nay jo shru maiN ghaltioN say bharpur shaeri kertay thay is hed tek behteri ker li hay keh ab woh bharpur shaeri kernay lagay haiN.

wassalam
sohail malik

**zain** · #5 07-01-2007, 05:21 PM

sab se pehley to aap ko HG POET CLUB main khush aamded kehta hoon Yasir saaheb,

aap ki shaairy par sirf itna hi kahoon ga ke Sohail malik saaheb ne jo tajaweez di hain,un par ghor kijiye ga,INSHA ALLAH bahot behtari paayain ge,
yahaan HG POET CLUB main bahot se saathi aesey hain,jin se aap kissi bhi lamhe madad le saktey hain,aor woh faraagh dilli se har waqt madad aor rehnumaayi ke liye tayaar rehtey hain,..so jahaan kaheen bhi aap zaroorat mehsoos karain,kissi bhi saathi se rabata kar saktey hain,

bahot khush rahiye,

**Y.R** · #6 07-01-2007, 08:03 PM

Bohat Sukriya Sohail Malik sahib and Zain sahib kay app nay Meri Ghazal per Discuse kee hai.. mager mujy iss bat per Hairat hoo rahi hai kay ... Azmaat Ali Awan ...Professor of H.A Govt Islamic Collge nay iss Ghazal ko Ghazal of the Year ka Khitab kis base per day dia tha he is the Senior Poet and Most Kalam un ka Dusry Poet apni Poetry main Likhty hian.. baki Ghazal ka app janty hee hon gay kay aik Mahfoom nahi hota..Ghazal asy Ashar per Munasir hoti hai jiss main Likhny wala At the time Bohat say Mozon ko Mady Nazar rakhta hai..NAZAM asi cheez hai jis main jahan say bat start hoti hai usi per end hoti hai..or Kita main sirf aik bat ko Show kiya jata hai...baki main kia keh sakta hon app ziada behtar samjty hon gay.....Wasi Shah kay aik shair per apni bat ko end karon ga...may bi iss Shair main bi zuban ke bohat bari Kharbi hai........Tnahi main to jab apni Band Kuba Kholti...Tery Husan say main apni Nigahon ko kehra kerta..............t ake care And Allah Hafiz

sirra · #7 07-01-2007, 09:33 PM

bohat zabardast ghazal hey .. No wander ki is ko ghazal of the year ka khitab mila ... khush rahain and share kertey rahain

**asif shahzad** · #8 07-02-2007, 08:46 AM

app ko abhi mahnat karnay ki zarorat hi pershan mat hoon waqat kay saat saat app buhat khuch learn kar lo gay

**waseem1g** · #9 07-02-2007, 09:50 AM

Buhat khooob .....

Barque · #10 07-02-2007, 10:52 AM

yasir bhai

baat ye hai kay jaab koi hamari takhleak mein khamian nikalta hai to hamein bura to shead thora sa lagta hai but agar ham un batoun ko neutral ho kar na dekhein orr apni ghaltioun ko samjhnay ke koshish na karein to behtri ka amal ruk jata hai.

so sab say behtar hota hai kay ham urdu addab kay baray baray shuara ko parhein or phir apni takhleqaat ko dekhein kay wo kidar khari hein,theek hai ham wesi takhleqat to nahi kar saktay magar iss say koch behtri zaror atti hai.orr hamein apni ghaltioun ka bhe andaza hota hai,

jaab koi meri takhleqaat mein ghaltian nikalta hai to mein to un say kuch sekhnay ke he koshish karta houn.

beharhaal nasir bahi ke batoun pay ghor kejeay ga

shukrea

muhabbat or appnaeyat kay sath

umarbarque

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