Urdu Poetry Forum

**nailahkb** · #21 06-12-2007, 08:46 AM

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Originally Posted by ArAbIaN gIrL

bohat khooob

thanks.............. ...

**nailahkb** · #22 06-12-2007, 08:47 AM

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Originally Posted by shazlay

ahan v nice kavish merkzi khial buhat acha ha nazam ka per mughay thori si rawani mai kami mahsoos hoi but overall buhat achi kavish ha
wish u all the best

ok thanks mainkosish karoon gi k main iss kami ko dooe kar sakoon

**nailahkb** · #23 06-12-2007, 08:48 AM

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Originally Posted by foqiazafar

bohat khub
kia ba'at hai
very nice
keep sharing

thankhu .................... .

**nailahkb** · #24 06-12-2007, 08:48 AM

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Originally Posted by bailamos_

v nice thinkings naila jii .... (flower4u) ..
Keep writing n sharing

HASDE WASDE RAWO

thanks.............. ..........

**nailahkb** · #25 06-12-2007, 08:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Aatif Saeed

Aik achi kawish Naila

Khush raho

thanksssssssssssssss ssssssss
sir u r gr8 poet,,,,,,

**nailahkb** · #26 06-12-2007, 08:49 AM

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Originally Posted by junkifunki

Indeed a good try......but you know your poem is lil bit mered by somewhat repititive kinda stuff....but it is much improved.....carry on doing like this.....weldone!!(* )(*)(*)
Chao,
Junki....

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**nailahkb** · #27 06-12-2007, 08:50 AM

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Originally Posted by Haya n

Naila Ji Khayal-e-Nazm Mujhay Bouhat Khoobsurat Laga... Umdagi Say Nazm Aap Nay Likhi Hay Jo Mujhay Achi Lagi...Likhna Owr Share Karna Jaari Rakhiye...Mairi Janib Say Daad Qubool Kijiye...

thanks.......haya ji

**nailahkb** · #28 06-12-2007, 08:51 AM

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Originally Posted by meerji

Ye mumkin to nahi phir bi soch lety hai !!!
Maan lety hai ye sab sach ho jayee
Mera dil tera ho jayee
Milan appna ho jayee
Khuda ki zaat sab kar saktti hai
Agar iss ki nazar ho jayee

bhut piyaari

Allah karay

Ameen

meer ji bohat bohat shukria apka