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RulesThis is a discussion on **Wo Khushboo Bhejha Kerti Thi..** within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; wo khushboo bhejha kerti thi main nazme'n likhta rehta tha wo hass ke ujaala kerti thi , main subhe'n likhta ...
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07-18-2006, 11:40 PM
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 wo khushboo bhejha kerti thi main nazme'n likhta rehta tha wo hass ke ujaala kerti thi , main subhe'n likhta rehta tha geeli rait pe sahil ki doobtay sooraj ke hamraah wo chup si chalti rehti thi, main soche'n likhta rehta tha deep wafa ke hotay thay ya shayad 2 taaray thay wo mujh ko dekha kerti thi main aankhen likhta rehta tha tapti dhoop ka rung bhi to phoolon sa ho jata tha wo zulfen khola kerti thi main shaamen likhta rehta tha toot ker aksar chahat mein, rooth ker yunhi ulfat mein wo mujh ko jeeta kerti thi main maaten likhta rehta tha misl-e-khoon wo rag rag mein ban ke zeesht hi behti thi mere jeenay ki wo wajah thi main saansen likhta rehta tha dono ki pehli chahat thi, dono toot ke miltay thay wo waaday kerti rehti thi main qasmen likhta rehta tha rasm-e-dunia ne aakhir hum ko bhatka dena tha wo manzil dhoonda kerti thi, main raahe'n likhta rehta tha chand din jab aa thehray thay uski meri judai mein main uske haath pe pehron phir lakeeren likhta rehta tha jaa'n se pyaray se shikwa khud ko ruswa kerna tha main apnay honton pe chup ki bus mohren likhta rehta tha din mein dard ki shidat ko hass ker main seh jata tha per bin uskay jo kat'ti thi wo raaten likhta rehta tha guzri yaad ke sab lamhay dil ko cheer ke rakhtay thay main gumnaami ke sehra mein haan ghaaten likhta rehta tha uss bin mann ka aangan phir khaali khaali rehta tha main tanhai ke haathon per aah maaten likhta rehta tha dasht-e-wafa mein basnay ka dekh haasil aey SehraNaward main yaaden likhta rehta hoon, main yaaden likhta rehta tha :SehraNaward:
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07-19-2006, 12:46 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaah bhai................ ..... bohat he zabardast.......... shandaar sharing.......... iss ghazak ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaey kam hai Thanx alot for such a nice sharing 1.gif ")1")
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07-19-2006, 01:04 AM
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Asalaam-o-Alaikum! Itnay arsay baad app ko yahan dekh ker mujhaye bay hud khushi ho rahi hai Ghazal dubara paher ker utna hi lutf aya jitna pehlay aya tha @};- bohut umddah @};-
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07-19-2006, 01:21 AM
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Wah...Bohat khub..bohat haseen...bohat achi tehreer hai...
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07-19-2006, 04:50 AM
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mein saansein likhta rehta tha .... kesey hain aap ?? hmesha ki trha bht khobsurat ghazal hai withlov ji .. bht arsey baad parrha aur aur bht khubsurat lga parrh kr hmesha ki trha likhtey rahiey khush rhiey 
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07-19-2006, 05:39 AM
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 Withlove bhai aik taveel arse k baad aapka kalaam paRhne ko mila ... Aur aik baar aur aap ne caabit kerdia k mayaarii kalaam kya hota hai Bohot khoobsurat ghazal kahii hai aap ne ... Bohot saarii daad aur tehseen qubool fermaa'iay Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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07-19-2006, 07:05 AM
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: : : kasey hain app wowwwww SUBHAN ALLAH kya likha hai jee app nay phir seydin main dard ki shidat ko hass ker main seh jata tha per Bin uskay jo kat'ti thi wo raatain likha rehta tha hamesha khush rahy (AMEEN) TAKE CARE ALLAH HAFIZ
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07-19-2006, 10:05 AM
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Motaram FArrukh Bahai Assalamoalaikom, yakeen janiay aap ki itni lambi ghair mowjoodgi mein jab bhi HG pe ana hua , tow aapki kammi bohat mehsoos hui, ankhein sab se pehlay apkay he aasaar dhoondtaTein, Aur abhi jo yeh ghazal daikhi tow parhnay se pehlay he isska ounvaan isskay shandaar honay ka ailaan kerta mehsoos hua, waisay tow sabhi ashaar bohat khoob thaiay, per akhri aur 5.vaN sher ke kiya he kehnay hein, Iss khoobsoorat takhleek ko youn hum sab se share kernay ka bohat shukkriya @};- @};- aur atay raha kijiay , Regards
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