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This is a discussion on Wo Kehta Hai Muhabbat Hai............ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; bohat achi kawish hy Maria Sahiba!!! jesa k sab ne kaha thoughts bohat achy haiN , aur aisa lagta hy ...
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#11
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| bohat achi kawish hy Maria Sahiba!!! jesa k sab ne kaha thoughts bohat achy haiN , aur aisa lagta hy k nazm ka aakhri his'sa aik alag nazm hy, aur oper wala his'sa aik aur nazm... go k aap ne donoN his'sy apni apni jaga umda likhy haiN lekin donoN ko akaTha aik nazm ki surat meiN paRheN to wo baat nahiN rehti... rawani khoob rahi, lekin lafz "Qehqa" nahiN hota , isy "Qeh-Qaha" paRhty haiN, aur likhty bhi isi wazn pr haiN.. jesa k aap ne aik misry meiN likha: GHAROUN MAIN GONJTE QEHQE,MAOUN KI DUAOUN MAIN misal k tor pr is misry ko ager aap aisy likheN to ye lafz apny sahi talafuz pr paRha ja'ye ga k: gharoN meiN qeh-qahooN ki gonj meiN, maaN ki duaoN meiN.... likhti raheN aur ham se share krti raheN, Allah Taala aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN aabad rhaeN...
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#12
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| bohat shukriya ap sabka nazam ko pasand karne ka aur yeh nazam hum ne bunyadi tour per do hissoun main hi likhi hai jis k aik hissa haqeqat aur aik hissa sirf khayaloun per mubni hai agr inko alag kardiya tu phir is haqeqat aur khayal k farq ko koi nahi pehchan payga islye in dono hissoun ka sath rehna zarori hai.aur apki batai hui tabdeli zaror karenge shukriya apna khayal rakhyega |
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#13
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| really buhat accha likha hay aap sadaa hi aisa hi likhte raho bal k iss se bhi accha likho |
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#14
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| bhaee behud haseen, kya tareef ki jay hum tu is nazm k husn main ghumho gai hain be hud aala' likhti raheye khush raheye
__________________ guzar hi jay gi terey baghair bhi laikin bohat udaas bohat sogwaar guzre gi |
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#15
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| very nice...keep up the continuation of hardworking...~! wesey bht zabardast kaawish hai..lekin aik baat k is topic per mujhey likhna tha..i mean mene socha tha magar aapney likh di....chalein kia hua yeh thi hi AAPKEY HAQ KI..inshALLAH alah aapko is mein kaamyab karega... shafaqF
__________________ Regards, ShafaqF "Proud To be Hussainians" Dil Ko Jalana Humney Chhordia ChHordia... --- Zanjeer Teri yaad hai zindaaN tera KHyal.. kesey RIHAA karega Tuu Apney Aseer KO??? |
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#16
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apna khayal rakhyega |
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#17
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| Quote:
apna khayal rakhyega |
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#18
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| Assalamualaik, itni umda...itni aala aur itney dilkash andaz mein yeh nazm........bohat mutassar karney wali hai.........bohat achhca laga parh kar.khush rahiye Allah hafiz
__________________ Yadash Bakahir ham bhi aadi thay dil lagi kay Ab khwab ki hain batein qissay thay jo kabhi kay |
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#19
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| Quote:
bohat shukriya apka bohat bohat koshish jari o sari hai apna khayal rakhyega Allah Hafiz |