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This is a discussion on Wo Jo Gul Abhi Khilay Nahi within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Wo jo gul abhi khilay nahi Wo jo khil uthein to un se kehna Wo jo teri Chaah main thein ...
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07-22-2007, 08:01 PM
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Wo jo gul abhi khilay nahi Wo jo khil uthein to un se kehna Wo jo teri Chaah main thein dar-ba-dar Wo aankhein ab nahi rahein Wo jo khushbu-on' ki thein muntazar Wo saansein bhi kahin kho gaein Wo jo tarap rahein thein umr bhar Wo dharkanein bhi so gaein Wo jo gul abhi khilay nahi Wo jo shayad kabhi khilein nahi Wo jo shayad kabhi jo khil uthein Wo jo khil uthein to un se kehna............. By Ahsan Akbar         |
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07-22-2007, 08:11 PM
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Ma thak gaya hoon shayad kuch is tarah ke jaisay saba ke narm haathon ma bikharta phool ho jaisay na koi ghum ho apna na koi khawab ho jaisay na koi paas ho apney na kuch ehsaas ho jaisay na koi dard ho dil ma na koi phaans ho jaisy meray paas kehnay ko na koi baat ho jaisay kuch ankahi si khahish ke jalti saans ho jaisay ik bey-naam si khamoshi Pighalti Raakh ho jaisy By Ahsan Akbar |
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07-22-2007, 08:24 PM
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Ma qehr aalood ujaalon se chhup ker naqoosh-e-manzil sar-e-shaam talaashta hoon Ma qafs-e-nafs-o-jaan' se cut ker peyker-e-khudi to taraashta hoon Ma vehshaton kay sehraa' ma kho ker lab-e-dasht khud ko pukaarta hoon Raah-e-ishq ma aabla paa ho ker ma johar-e-manzil ko lalkaarta hoon Us kay tassawwur ki chaap sun ker dil o jaan' ke dar-o-baam sanwaarta hoon Khusboo hoti mohabbaton ma bas ker ma jism o wajdaan ko nikhaarta hoon Ma naaqib e wafa se bicher ker khud apney saaey se bhaagta hoon Na badnaam ho tu mera ho kar bas itni si wafa maangta hoon Ahsan Akbar |
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07-22-2007, 10:03 PM
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aslamoalaikum so nice bohat aacha likha |
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07-22-2007, 10:04 PM
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aslamoalaikum yeh bhi bohat aacha likha |
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07-22-2007, 10:36 PM
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achhi koshish hai janaab,  merey bhahi POET CLUB ke rules ke mutaabiq aap aek din main sirf aek hi thread post kar saktey hain,jabke aap ne 3 threads post ki hain,.....rules issi section main sticky thread ki shakal main mojood hain,PLEASE thori si zehmat kar ke un ko aek nazar dekh lijiye,.......filhaa l main aap ki yeh teenon threads merge kar raha hoon,umeed hai aap aainda aehtiyaat karain ge, bahot khush rahiye, 1.gif ")1")
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07-23-2007, 04:07 AM
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nice try................. .
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07-23-2007, 10:50 AM
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Bohat Umda Janab..... Issi Tarah Likhty Rahain Aur Hamary Sath Share Karty Rahin. Laken Zain Bai Ne Jo Bataya Hai Ussey Be Parh Lain..... Sada Khush Rahain....
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07-24-2007, 09:25 AM
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Main thak gaya hoon shayad kuch is tarah ke jaisay saba ke narm haathon ma bikharta phool ho jaisay...ye poem bohat achi lagi baqi bhi acha likha aap ne khush rahin aabad rahin
__________________  MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...!  |
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#10
07-26-2007, 01:23 PM
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nice
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