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This is a discussion on - : - Waada - : - within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Thank You Fakhr Bhai 4 liking my poem ... @};- Khush Rehiyah Ap bhi .. @};-...
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| Thank You Fakhr Bhai 4 liking my poem ... @};- Khush Rehiyah Ap bhi .. @};-
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#22
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| Nice Guriya Ji buhat achi poem likhi ha aap naay 3 Aur central idea bhi kafi acha haa ... dosti jaab piyaar main badal jati haa tu buhat jald toot jati haa. Dosti dosti hi rahaay tu hameshaa kaay liya hoti haa. Nice poem , nice wordings and nice central idea. Keep on sharing :-v
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#23
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| WAH GURYA G SABARDAST 3
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#24
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Khire ... asa tu kuch nahi k dosti pyar main badalney k bas kamzor yeha tut jati hai ... asa honey sey tu ap ko do do rishtey mil jatey hain ek acha dost or ek life partner .... or rishton ka tootna or jurnaa tu sub ki Kismat per depend karta hai Thanx 4 liking n Posting here .. @};- |
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#25
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Kismat kuch nahi hotii , insaan hi saab kuch hotaay hain. Aak dosraay paar trust hi saab kuch hota haa. Dosti ho ya life partener jaab aus paar trust hi itna kamzoor ho kaay kishi aur ki baat sun kaar toot ja haay tu phir ashaay relation ko toot hi jana chahiya ![]() Anyway , acha likhti hian aap , keep on writing :-v |
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#26
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| very beautiful poem good work
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#27
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| guriya ![]() aik arsai kai baad tumhein yahan dekha hai aur mujeh bauhat acha laga ![]() bauhat hi khubsurat si nazam likhi hai tum nai ![]() khush raho ![]()
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#28
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| Thanx a lot ... 4 liking Diya appppiiii ... ... ji time he nahi mil raha tha mujh ko ais liya bas ... :cry6 Ap sub ki guidence ki bahat zaroorat hai ... abhi tu (yes) Ap bhi Khush rehiyehh ... ![]() |
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#29
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![]() Be Happy .. ![]() |