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Usko kho ke qismat bhi hath mal gai jese
Hijr ki jo talkhi thi , khoo-n main ghul gai jese

Zindagi ke maile main tujh se milna chaha to
Khuab toota jata he , aankh khul gai jese

Khuahishon ke sholon ne khod main jalna chaha to
Moom ghul gia aise , zat jal gai jese

Un larazti palkon se youn gira koi aansoo
Ujlay ujlay phoolon ki shakh hil gai jese

Us ne aise dekha tha waqt tham gia jese
Us ne sath chora to sham dhal gai jese

Main to chup youn rehti hon lajawab kar dongi
Aur wo muskurata he bat tal gai jese

Aaj to sahar kar do mere dil ki basti main
Aaj youn na jane do rat kal gai jese

AAJ TUJH KO DEKHA TO YOUN LAGA MAIN ZINDA HON
IK JO SANS KHO DI THI , AAJ MIL GAI JESE

TU NE KESE KAR DALI RAIGA-N MERI CHAHAT
MERI PEHLI KHUAHISH THI,………DIL MAIN RULL GAI JESE…..!!!!

BY; KANWAL SHAHAB AHMAD.

bohot khoob kanwal dear bohot acchi lagi gazal keep on writing dear

bohat khoob kanwal ..as always

thx for sharin ... /flower

AAJ TUJH KO DEKHA TO YOUN LAGA MAIN ZINDA HON
IK JO SANS KHO DI THI , AAJ MIL GAI JESE


very nice kanwal ...

thanks for sharing

<!--QuoteBegin-kanwal+Sep 5 2003, 08:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kanwal @ Sep 5 2003, 08:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Usko kho ke qismat bhi hath mal gai jese
Hijr ki jo talkhi thi , khoo-n main ghul gai jese

Zindagi ke maile main tujh se milna chaha to
Khuab toota jata he , aankh khul gai jese

Khuahishon ke sholon ne khod main jalna chaha to
Moom ghul gia aise , zat jal gai jese

Un larazti palkon se youn gira koi aansoo
Ujlay ujlay phoolon ki shakh hil gai jese

Us ne aise dekha tha waqt tham gia jese
Us ne sath chora to sham dhal gai jese

Main to chup youn rehti hon lajawab kar dongi
Aur wo muskurata he bat tal gai jese

Aaj to sahar kar do mere dil ki basti main
Aaj youn na jane do rat kal gai jese

AAJ TUJH KO DEKHA TO YOUN LAGA MAIN ZINDA HON
IK JO SANS KHO DI THI , AAJ MIL GAI JESE

TU NE KESE KAR DALI RAIGA-N MERI CHAHAT
MERI PEHLI KHUAHISH THI,………DIL MAIN RULL GAI JESE…..!!!!

BY; KANWAL SHAHAB AHMAD. [/b][/quote]
bohut khoob ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, @};- /flower @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-kanwal+Sep 5 2003, 05:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kanwal @ Sep 5 2003, 05:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Usko kho ke qismat bhi hath mal gai jese
Hijr ki jo talkhi thi , khoo-n main ghul gai jese

Zindagi ke maile main tujh se milna chaha to
Khuab toota jata he , aankh khul gai jese

Khuahishon ke sholon ne khod main jalna chaha to
Moom ghul gia aise , zat jal gai jese

Un larazti palkon se youn gira koi aansoo
Ujlay ujlay phoolon ki shakh hil gai jese

Us ne aise dekha tha waqt tham gia jese
Us ne sath chora to sham dhal gai jese

Main to chup youn rehti hon lajawab kar dongi
Aur wo muskurata he bat tal gai jese

Aaj to sahar kar do mere dil ki basti main
Aaj youn na jane do rat kal gai jese

AAJ TUJH KO DEKHA TO YOUN LAGA MAIN ZINDA HON
IK JO SANS KHO DI THI , AAJ MIL GAI JESE

TU NE KESE KAR DALI RAIGA-N MERI CHAHAT
MERI PEHLI KHUAHISH THI,………DIL MAIN RULL GAI JESE…..!!!!

BY; KANWAL SHAHAB AHMAD. [/b][/quote]


Aaj to sahar kar do mere dil ki basti main
Aaj youn na jane do rat kal gai jese


bhot nice kanwal...

kafee muktalif...

lakin i feel some problems in typing i think...

as some time our typing errors r taken as problem in 'wazon''

ghzal is just superb...


/flower /flower /flower

THANX TO ALL /flower