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Old 08-17-2008, 02:15 PM
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main ne aik ghazal likhi thi, kuchh din pehlay woh aap se share kar raha hun. apni raaye aur tanqeed se zarur nawaziyega.
attachement mein urdu mein bhi likhi hai. aassani hogi parhne mein.



use sadiyo.n mein yaad aaya nahin hun
aur main hun! use ab bhi bhula nahin hun

bohot chup raha kuchh bhi bola nahin hun
jo bola nahin hun, to goya nahin hun!


hai mera har ik subh, naya koi rahbar
pa manzil talak ab bhi pohoncha nahin hun

khuda jaane kab tak rahega taghaful
main, haif! is jahan mein humesha nahin hun

woh baad-e-saba jabse ruThi chaman se
bas us waqt se main bhi mehka nahin hun

wafa to libaas-o-badan sa hai rishta
tu deewar hai par main saya nahi hun

hai mere sheher mein bohot zor-e-khanjar
pe sacchai se ab bhi Darta nahin hun

mohabbat mein khaaye hain main ne bhi dhoke
haan! shayad main ab aisa lagta nahin hun

hai wehshat hi wehshat tujhe kya bataaun
main us ki gali tak bhi jaata nahin hun

qaraar-o-qasam saare jhooTay hi nikle
hai lagne laga main bhi saccha nahin hun

mujhe zindagi se yahi ik gila hai
ke main zindagi tak ko samjha nahin hun

tere hijr ke dukh mein hun sar ba zaanoo
agarche abhi reza reza nahin hun

"mudabbar" bohot hi jalan thi jigar mein
haqeeqat hai main zyada likhta nahin hun


Mudabbar Khan

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wah je nice sharing.....
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Bohat achee Koshish hai!!!!!!
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wah je nice sharing.....
thank u. bht shukriya.
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Bohat achee Koshish hai!!!!!!
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Bohat hi acha...........
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Bohat hi acha...........
bht bht shukriya. u r really a sweet person
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very nice................ ...........
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bahut umda ghazal hai janab, baar baar parh kar aur ziyada lutf aata hai, is tohfe ka shukriya!
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