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Old 09-28-2006, 07:02 PM
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aik naii ghazal paish-e-khidmat hai..
khush rahiye


Huwa jo kuch, bhulana chahiye tha
usay ab laut aana chahiye tha!
yeh sara bojh mere sar pe kiyoN hai?
usay bhi gham uthana chahiye tha
kh'moshi say ta'aluq torr dala
usay pehlay batana chahiye tha
usi ki yad ki khusbu hai dil maiN
mujhe jisko bhulana chahiye tha
zara ghalti pe woh yooN rooth baitha
usay goya...bahaana chahiye tha
karakti dhoop maiN jhulsa gaya tha
parinday ko thikana chahiye tha
mujhe pa kar usay kiya chain milta!
jisay saara zamana chahiye tha
mujhe un sandali poroN say chu kar
usay khusbu banana chahiye tha
meri theeN khaahishaiN bachoN ke jaisi
mujhe guzra zamana chahiye tha!
usay barsaat ki boondoN ko lay kar
mera gajra sajana chahiye tha
jo gham likhoN to mere lafz royaiN
hunar mujh ko yeh aana chahiye tha..!!
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mujhe pa kar usay kiya chain mila!
jisay saara zamana chahiye tha


Bohat zaberdast Mehro .. bay had daad meri tarf say ..
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Very nice gazel mughy samgh bhi aa gayi sari ki sari bas "sandali poroN say chu kar" ye samjh nahi ayi baki bohat accha likha app nay khatoon

Alah nazer na lagaye

bphat khush raho hansti muskurati raho(ameen)
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nice kavish
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gooooooooooooooooooo ood

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aik naii ghazal ho gaii khud ba khud .... bardashtaiN ab
khush rahiye


Huwa jo kuch, bhulana chahiye tha
usay ab laut aana chahiye tha!
yeh sara bojh mere sar pe kiyoN hai?
usay bhi gham uthana chahiye tha
kh'moshi say ta'aluq torr dala
usay pehlay batana chahiye tha
usi ki yad ki khusbu hai dil maiN
mujhe jisko bhulana chahiye tha
zara ghalti pe woh yooN rooth baitha
usay goya...bahaana chahiye tha
karakti dhoop maiN jhulsa gaya tha
parinday ko thikana chahiye tha
mujhe pa kar usay kiya chain mila!
jisay saara zamana chahiye tha
mujhe un sandali poroN say chu kar
usay khusbu banana chahiye tha
meri theeN khaahishaiN bachoN ke jaisi
mujhe guzra zamana chahiye tha!
usay barsaat ki boondoN ko lay kar
mera gajra sajana chahiye tha
jo gham likhoN to mere lafz royaiN
hunar mujh ko yeh aana chahiye tha..!!
Sari Ki Sari Ghazal kamal ki hai..........
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mujhe pa kar ussey kaya chain milta?
jisse saara zamaana chaahiye tha.

wah,wah,wah,
bahot khoob ji bahot khoob,Mohtarma Mehreen un nissah saahiba kaya khoob ghazal kahi hai aap ne is baar bhi,go ke bahot arse ba.ad aap ne kuchh likh kar share kiya hai,ta ham is main koyi shaq-o-shubah naheen ke ghazal lajawaab kahi hai aap ne,so dheron daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,aor yoonhi achha achha likhti rahiye.
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