It seems that you are unregistered. Please register with us by clicking Here, or if you are already registered login here
User Name: Password:
Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum

Urdu Poetry Forum

Welcome to Urdu Community & Poetry/Shayari Forum

 


~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

This is a discussion on ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; bohat khoob ghazal likhi hai mehroo ... @};- khush raho .........


Go Back   Urdu Poetry/Shayari Forum > Urdu Poetry > Urdu Poet Club

Video Photo Books Games Sites Register Groups FAQ Calendar Mark Forums Read Chat [3]

Notices

Rate This Thread - ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~.
(1)
Thread Rating: 1 votes, 5.00 average.

Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #21  
Old 09-29-2006, 07:11 PM
~ Manahil ~'s Avatar
Princess
 
Join Date: Jul 2003
Age: 24
Posts: 52,360

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 543
Thanked 1,245 Times in 778 Posts
Nominated 12 Times in 3 Posts
Nominated TOTW/F/M Award(s): 1
Rep Power: 1000
~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute~ Manahil ~ has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Best Graphics Designer Best Graphics Designer Best Graphics Designer Best Graphics Designer 
Total Awards: 5
Default Re: ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

bohat khoob ghazal likhi hai mehroo ... @};-


khush raho ......
__________________



Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #22  
Old 09-29-2006, 09:00 PM
:Qassim:'s Avatar
HG Club
 
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Brampton, Ontario
Age: 25
Posts: 3,302

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 6
Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 735
:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month Poet of the Month Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 3
Default Re: ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

Quote:
Originally Posted by kanch ki mehroo View Post


aik naii ghazal ho gaii khud ba khud .... bardashtaiN ab
khush rahiye


Huwa jo kuch, bhulana chahiye tha
usay ab laut aana chahiye tha!
yeh sara bojh mere sar pe kiyoN hai?
usay bhi gham uthana chahiye tha
kh'moshi say ta'aluq torr dala
usay pehlay batana chahiye tha
usi ki yad ki khusbu hai dil maiN
mujhe jisko bhulana chahiye tha
zara ghalti pe woh yooN rooth baitha
usay goya...bahaana chahiye tha
karakti dhoop maiN jhulsa gaya tha
parinday ko thikana chahiye tha
mujhe pa kar usay kiya chain mila!
jisay saara zamana chahiye tha
mujhe un sandali poroN say chu kar
usay khusbu banana chahiye tha
meri theeN khaahishaiN bachoN ke jaisi
mujhe guzra zamana chahiye tha!
usay barsaat ki boondoN ko lay kar
mera gajra sajana chahiye tha
jo gham likhoN to mere lafz royaiN
hunar mujh ko yeh aana chahiye tha..!!


ChooTuu iss behad dilkaSh aur mayaarii taKhleeq per bohot saarii daad qubool kero ... Bohot hee umdah ghazal hai

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
__________________
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #23  
Old 09-29-2006, 11:04 PM
Ansa's Avatar
Star Members
 
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Pakistan, Karachi.
Posts: 1,148

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 12 Times in 12 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 340
Ansa has much to be proud ofAnsa has much to be proud ofAnsa has much to be proud ofAnsa has much to be proud ofAnsa has much to be proud ofAnsa has much to be proud ofAnsa has much to be proud ofAnsa has much to be proud ofAnsa has much to be proud ofAnsa has much to be proud of
Default Re: ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

wah buhat khoob..............

dua hey yunhi likhti rahin app.
__________________
@};- Please update your Signature : Administrator HallaGulla
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #24  
Old 09-30-2006, 05:53 AM
shab-e-tanhaee's Avatar
HG Designer
 
Join Date: Jul 2003
Posts: 2,928

Country:

Tutorials: 0

My Mood:
Thanks: 0
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 325
shab-e-tanhaee is a splendid one to beholdshab-e-tanhaee is a splendid one to beholdshab-e-tanhaee is a splendid one to beholdshab-e-tanhaee is a splendid one to beholdshab-e-tanhaee is a splendid one to beholdshab-e-tanhaee is a splendid one to beholdshab-e-tanhaee is a splendid one to behold
Default Re: ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

wah jee wah .... bohat khoob likha giya hay khud ba khud
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #25  
Old 09-30-2006, 10:43 AM
ghurob-e-aftab's Avatar
~~~ Sirf Tum ~~~
 
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Karachi
Age: 30
Posts: 3,806

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 719
ghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond reputeghurob-e-aftab has a reputation beyond repute
Default Re: ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

usi ki yad ki khusbu hai dil maiN
mujhe jisko bhulana chahiye tha
zara ghalti pe woh yooN rooth baitha
usay goya...bahaana chahiye tha


Wah ! aik our buhat hi khobsurat ghazal parhnay ko meli .. mehroo buhat acha likha hai ,, yooN hi likhti rahoo ...

buhat khush rahoo
__________________
Shayad Yai Taqabor Ki Saza Mujh Ko Meli Hai
Bari Shaan Sai Ubhra Tha Ab Doob Raha HoN
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #26  
Old 09-30-2006, 11:16 AM
MEHTAB's Avatar
~*~Raat Ka Rahii~*~
 
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: HaWa K DoSh PaR
Age: 27
Posts: 11,456

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 1167
MEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond reputeMEHTAB has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 1
Default Re: ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

Assalam-o-alaikum

Buhat hi umdah Ghazal hay Mehroooooo
Really buhat maza aya parh karrr
har shair hi umdah raha

bass yehii baat tu achi hay u main
warna tu kisi kaam ki nahi hooo
Buhatttttttttttttt Sara Khush Rahoooo
__________________




Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #27  
Old 09-30-2006, 01:47 PM
chariagy-aakhir-shub's Avatar
Star Members
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: shahray khamoshan
Posts: 1,182

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 0
Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 108
chariagy-aakhir-shub is on a distinguished road
Default Re: ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

meri theeN khaahishaiN bachoN ke jaisi
mujhe guzra zamana chahiye tha!

mujhe pa kar usay kiya chain mila!
jisay saara zamana chahiye tha

mashalha bohut acha likha p nay mahro sis , is ki kya tareff karyon,bohut bohut khobsorat lafzayon main bohut nazuk or sachy jazbat ki akasi, so nice , daherayon dad or duwayin
__________________
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo Submit to Netscape Submit to SlashDot Submit to Reddit Submit to FarkSubmit to Newsvine
Reply With Quote
  #28  
Old 09-30-2006, 05:23 PM
:Qassim:'s Avatar
HG Club
 
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Brampton, Ontario
Age: 25
Posts: 3,302

Country:

Tutorials: 0

Thanks: 6
Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts
Nominated 0 Times in 0 Posts
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 0
Rep Power: 735
:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute:Qassim: has a reputation beyond repute
Awards Showcase
Poet of the Month Poet of the Month Poet of the Month 
Total Awards: 3
Default Re: ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

Quote:
Originally Posted by MEHTAB View Post

bass yehii baat tu achi hay u main
warna tu kisi kaam ki nahi hooo
:haha :haha :haha
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!Submit to Yahoo!Submit to Google!Submit to Live!Submit to Facebook!Submit to Ask!Submit to StumbleUpon!Submit to Squidoo