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~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

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Old 10-19-2007, 01:40 AM
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meri theeN khaahishaiN bachoN ke jaisi
mujhe guzra zamana chahiye tha!

jo gham likhoN to mere lafz royaiN
hunar mujh ko yeh aana chahiye tha..!!



kya baat hai.........bohttttt tttttt umda!
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ALLAH karey zor-e-qalam aur zyada...(AAMEEN,SUMM A AAMEEN)
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jo gham likhoN to mere lafz royaiN
hunar mujh ko yeh aana chahiye tha..!!
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mujhe bhi bohut achi lagi hai aap ki ghazal Mehroo aur aap ka ye shair bohut acha laga Shama-e-mehfil.
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bohut achi......
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very nice poetry
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mujhe pa kar usay kiya chain milta!
jisay saara zamana chahiye tha

wah...zabardast sis...!!!
like it so much...issi tarah sey likhtii rahiye gha...!!!
GOD bless u alwayz...!!!
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zara ghalti pe woh yooN rooth baitha
usay goya...bahaana chahiye tha


Mehro Sis..........Kamal Kar Diya App Ne...

Boht Boht Umda Gazal Kahi App Ne........
Dheron Dad qabool Kijiye..........Exce llent
Sada Khush-o-khuram Rahain.
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aik naii ghazal paish-e-khidmat hai..
khush rahiye

Huwa jo kuch, bhulana chahiye tha
usay ab laut aana chahiye tha!
yeh sara bojh mere sar pe kiyoN hai?
usay bhi gham uthana chahiye tha
kh'moshi say ta'aluq torr dala
usay pehlay batana chahiye tha
usi ki yad ki khusbu hai dil maiN
mujhe jisko bhulana chahiye tha
zara ghalti pe woh yooN rooth baitha
usay goya...bahaana chahiye tha
karakti dhoop maiN jhulsa gaya tha
parinday ko thikana chahiye tha
mujhe pa kar usay kiya chain milta!
jisay saara zamana chahiye tha
mujhe un sandali poroN say chu kar
usay khusbu banana chahiye tha
meri theeN khaahishaiN bachoN ke jaisi
mujhe guzra zamana chahiye tha!
usay barsaat ki boondoN ko lay kar
mera gajra sajana chahiye tha
jo gham likhoN to mere lafz royaiN

hunar mujh ko yeh aana chahiye tha..!!
hmmmmmmm acha khyal hi MASHA ALLAH
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