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~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~

This is a discussion on ~*~Usay ab laut aana chahiye tha..!!~*~ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by ali4everfriend loot kar jo naya tu koy baat he ho gi us ki majbore bhi us kai ...


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Old 10-02-2007, 10:26 PM
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loot kar jo naya tu koy baat he ho gi
us ki majbore bhi us kai saath he ho gi
app nai likhe ghzal wo bhi pharta hoga
us aankhon main nami Ali aj bhi ho gi


hahaha very nice sister jeee Gazal sweet hi app ki aye kitta app ki ghzal k naam karta hon

jasa bhi ulata sedha ... kush rahin app ka bhai Ali
bohat shukriya bachay..

khush rahiye
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aaj kal fursat ka mafar hay,,takheer say parha,,kiya baat hay mahroo,,kam kam likhti ho laikin khoob hi likhti ho,,,usi andaz ki ghazal hay jo dil ko cholayti hay,,,,sachi baat hay maza aaya,,, dosri kawish bhi page pr nazar aarahi hay pahli fursat main parhon ga,,ye ghazal boht pasand aae,,q k droon e dil ki baysakhta chalak hay is main,,boht saari daad,
bohat shukriya janab..

ji maiN nazm par bhi aapke comments ki muntazir hooN..

khush rahiye
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mehro sis hamesha ki tarha is bar bhi bazi aap legain.bohat hi zabar10 gazal likhi hia aap nay dad kubool kijiay .aaj to aap mujhay aapni shagirdi main lelijiay main aap ki fan ho gai hon ..
hamesha khush rahain.
bohat shukriya bachay... mujhe khushi hai k apne mujhe is qabil samjha...

maiN to khud abhi seekh rahi hooN... phir bhi.. apni basaat k mutabiq humaisha apki rahnumai k liye hazir hooN..

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bohot khoob
meri taraf se bohot sari daad qabool kijiye
khush rahiye

bohat shukriya Ihsan..

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meri thi khahishein bachchon ke jaisi

mujhe guzra zamana chahiye tha

pahle to aap ki nazm ne itna mutasser kiya ke ab tak dil main jane

kaisa ahsas chubh raha hai.aur ab yeh ghazal.kitni sadgi se aap itne

gehre ahsas likh leti hain ke rooh ki gahrai ko chhu leti hai aap

ki tehreer.
konse alfaz main tareef karun?
sharminda kiye day rahi ho bhaee tum to... maiN bohat shukr guzar hooN k tumne donoN kawishat ko itna saraha...

bohat shukriya... bohat khush raho
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last time jab yeh ghazal perhi thi tab bhi bohat achi lagi ..........

yeh ghazal her bar perhnay per naee hi lagti hai......

aap ka likha howa perh ker alfaz nahi miltay k kaisay tareef ki jaye.........

bohat acha likhti hain hamaysha aap................

keep sharing
bohat shukr guzar hooN maani.... bohat shukriya..

khush rahiye
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zara ghalti pe wo yuN rooth betha
use goya bahana chahye tha

mujhe paa kar use kia chain milta
jise sara zamana chahye tha

meri theeN khwahisheN bachchoN ke jaisi
mujhe guzra zamana chahye tha

jo gham likhooN to mere lafz royeN
hunar mujh ko ye ana chahye tha

Wah wah wah....Mehroo Sahiba...ghaliban ye ghazal aap ne bohot pehle post ki hogi lekin main ne aaj pehli baar parhi hai...aap ne to waqai kamal kar dia hai...yun to poori ghazal hi behtreen hai magar ye 4 ash'aar to lajawab hain jo ooper likhe hain. Dheron daad is nihaaet shandar ghazal ki nazr hai.
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