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This is a discussion on Umeed within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Hazraat ik mudat baad kuch share karnay ki jasarat kar raha hoon ummed hay khanda peshani say bardasht karain gay ...


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Old 08-19-2006, 04:02 PM
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Hazraat ik mudat baad kuch share karnay ki jasarat kar raha
hoon ummed hay khanda peshani say bardasht karain gay

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Hijjar ki ik sham wahain peh doob gai
Wasal ki ik sehar jahan say phooti thi
Tum nay shaid wahain say is ko joor dia
Hathoon ki zanjeer jahan say tooti thi
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Old 08-19-2006, 05:05 PM
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Hazraat ik mudat baad kuch share karnay ki jasarat kar raha
hoon ummed hay khanda peshani say bardasht karain gay

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Hijjar ki ik sham wahain peh doob gai
Wasal ki ik sehar jahan say phooti thi
Tum nay shaid wahain say is ko joor dia
Hathoon ki zanjeer jahan say tooti thi

tum ne shayad wahein se is ko joor dia
hathon ki zanjeer jahan se tooti thii

aacha he primitive bhaii...aachii kawish he.
daad qabool kejeye
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Old 08-19-2006, 05:26 PM
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Tum nay shaid wahain say is ko joor dia
Hathoon ki zanjeer jahan say tooti thi

bohat khoob humerei traf se dhairon dadh kabool kijiya(flower4u) ALLAH ap ko sada kush rakhe. Ameen sum Ameen[-<
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bahot khoob bhahi,bahot arse ke baad aap ki tarf se kuch inaayat huwa hai,zara jaldi jaldi aaya kijiye,ke aap ki tehreeron ka intazaar rehta hai.
qitta bahot khoobsurat kaha hai aap ne,daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye.
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Masha Allah...Bouhat Khoobsurat Qitta Parhnay Ko Mila...Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...
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BUht Khooooobb janaab!!!
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Buhat khoob likha hay bhai app ne
khush rahiay aur likhte rahiay
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vry vry nice jeee...
...i will try sumthin' new.....buhat khoob...lols...
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bohat khoob janab ........... likhtay rahyay
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