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yeh mein ney "Tarhaee ghazal" kay liyey kuch likha thaa.. aap loug bataain na kaisa likhaa hai..


Baaqiyoun ki tou khair hai laikin
"Tuu bhi dil uter na jaaey kahin"

Mujh ko her dam yeh khauf rehta hai
Khwaab mera bikhher na jaaey kahin

Ab kay sawan mein tuu ney aana tha
Daikh sawan guzar na jaaey kahin

Dil ko andaisha hai tou buss itna
Mausam-e-gham thheher na jaaey kahin

Kitni uljhi hai, kitni bikhri hai
Zindagi yoon guzar na jaaey kahin

Raat guzri hai bari mushkil sey
Yeh sahar bhi guzar na jaaey kahin
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achi hay magar matlay ka shair nahen hay .
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achi hay magar matlay ka shair nahen hay .

mein ney likhney ki koushish ki magar .. likhaa hi nahin gaya ....
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bohat umda he janab, aache kawish he. Tesara sha'r bohat pasand aaya. Leykin pehle sha'r mein jo aap ne kaha k 'Dusaron ki to kheir he...', 'dusaron' se keya dushmani he koe, k unki kheir he......

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buhat khoob Nain Tara @};-


Raat guzri hai bari mushkil sey
Yeh sahar bhi guzar na jaaey kahin


buhat achay /good1


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Nicely written
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/aoa Nain ji!

Aap ki Ghazal bohat umda hai,tamaam Ash'ar khubsurat hain
Daad qabool karain itni khubsurat Ghazal likhnay pe.
Kitni uljhi hai, kitni bikhri hai
Zindagi yoon guzar na jaaey kahin
is ka pehla misra yoon kerlain to kia khayal hai,,,
'uljhi uljhi si,bikhri bikhri si'
ye sirf mashwara hai,
khush rahyye

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bohat umda he janab, aache kawish he. Tesara sha'r bohat pasand aaya. Leykin pehle sha'r mein jo aap ne kaha k 'Dusaron ki to kheir he...', 'dusaron' se keya dushmani he koe, k unki kheir he......

khush raheye.
bouhot shukriya inam sahaab...teesra sher mujhey bhi pasand hai...

aur rahi baat doosroun ki ...tou aap hi bataien naa sab yaksaa'n tou nahin houtey naa.. kuch logoun sey ham ziada umeedein baand laitey hein ..phir issi khauf mein umr guzaar daitey hein ke umeedein toot na jaain .. ke jaisey aasmaa'n per bithaa diya hai tou mouh kay bal na gir parein..

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Raat guzri hai bari mushkil sey
Yeh sahar bhi guzar na jaaey kahin


buhat achay /good1


khush raho @};-
thanx achi Aamna ..


jeeti rahoo