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RulesThis is a discussion on Tumhain kis ne kaha tha within the Nazam forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; By mehwish afsar...
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10-16-2008, 01:15 AM
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By mehwish afsar
__________________ "Don't tell ALLAH how big your problems are... tell your problems how big your ALLAH is"                   |
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10-16-2008, 03:46 AM
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very nice it has very Enghish touch. |
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10-16-2008, 06:02 AM
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mahwish likhti rahiye aur khush rahiye. Zemir.
__________________ is dasht mein jal jal Zameer - e be asar ka Haal ab DhooNDay waheeN per khak-e-dil, paaey jahaaN bhi rakh rakh |
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10-16-2008, 11:28 AM
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Assalam o alaikum.. Bohat bohat shukria... YEH NAZAM MERE NAHI BALKAY MOHSIN NAQWI KI HAI MAIN MENTION NAHI KER PAIE MERA NET WORK PROBLEM AGAY THA.. IS K LIAN MAIN AAP SE MAFI MANGTI HOON.. Apna khayal rakhya ga... Aur duaoon main yaad... Mehwish afsar Last edited by MEHWISH AFSAR; 10-16-2008 at 11:24 PM. |
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10-16-2008, 03:51 PM
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Is it ur Creation???????????? ?? its ma all time Fav.........!! Wel it is written by A known poet................ .......Mohsin Naqvi!!!
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10-16-2008, 05:13 PM
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U know what ......... this time u hav made a big mistake , as u have posted this poetry which belongs to a well known poet namely " MOHSIN NAQVI " if u cant write then plz stop posting works of others as ur own coz thats pretty disgusting thing that one can do, as stealing is a crime. dont know y but many people in this section do this ... MODS do i need to give any proof for this one too ??????? or u know who this poem belongs to ??
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10-16-2008, 10:28 PM
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assalam o alikum Mehwish! samjh nahin aa raha kia kahooN main. Yeah nazm mairay rohaani ostaad janab e Moshsin Naqvi ki hai jiss main thori c termeem ki hai aap ne jo k saaf nazer aa rahi hai, Tumhain kis ne kaha tha Dopehar k germ sooraj ki taraf daikho Aur etni dair takk daikho K beenaee pighal jaee Tumhain kis ne kaha tha AasmaaN se toot'ti andhi oolajhti bijliyun se Dosti ker lo Aur itni dosti ker lo K ghar ka ghar hi jal jaee Tumhain kis ne kaha tha? Aik anjaanay safar main Ajnabi rahroo k hamraaH door takk jaoo Aur etni door takk jaoo K woh rasta badal jaee (Tallo e Askh, page number 43) Aap ki iss nazm ne aap ki saari shairi hi doubt main daal di hai So wat do u say? Aatif
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#8
10-16-2008, 11:06 PM
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Assalam o alaikum.. Main aap sab se tah-e-dil se mafi mangti hoon main mohsin naqwi ka naam likhna bhool gai thi aur mera net work problem agaya tha is lian main OPER MENTION NAHI KER PAIE KAY YEH MOHSIN NAQWI KI SHARI HAI...mohsin naqwi sahab ka naam nahi likh saki tou is ghalti per main aap sab se mafi chahti hoon umed hai aap sab mujh ko maf ker dain gay..aiend main dahan se type karoon gi...kisi aur ki shayri ko apnay naam se likhnay ki main kabhi bhi ghlti nahi ker sakti aur itna bara naam nahi yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta hai... MERE SHAYARI JO AB TAK MAIN NAY BHIJI HAIN WO SAB MERE APNI HAIN HAAN MUJH SE GHLTI HOI HAI JIS KA MAIN AAP SAB SE kisi aur ki shayri ko apnay naam se likhnay ki main kabhi bhi ghlti nahi ker sakti meray pass bilkul issi tarhan likhi hoi hai jis tarhan main ne uper likhi hai is main main ne bilkul bhi tarmem nahi ki hai...aur itna bara naam nahi yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta hai...kay un ki shayari ko main aapni bana ker pasish karoon...ATRAF KER RAHEE HOON..PLZZZZZZZZZ MUJH MAAF KER DEJYA GA.. ghlti insaan se hi hoti hai jis ka main atraf karti hoon...is lian aap sab se umed rakhti hoon kay aap mujhay maaf karain gay aur plzzzzzzzzzzz mere shahyari ko shak ki nigh se mat dekhya ga main qasam khati hoon kay is shayari ko choor ker tamam kalam mera apna zati hai UMED HAI AAP SAB MERE IS GHALTI KO MAAF KER DAIN GAY.. Shukria ... Mehwish afsar Last edited by MEHWISH AFSAR; 10-17-2008 at 03:32 AM. |
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#9
10-17-2008, 08:35 AM
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subh ka bhoola......... Zemir |
Tumhain kis ne kaha tha 
