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RulesThis is a discussion on ~~.Tum Ko Main Kiya Likhon.~~ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Salam To Every One.......here its my newest poem.... i hope you will like it. Tum Hi Batao Mein Tum Ko ...
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#1
05-25-2007, 07:00 PM
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Salam To Every One.......here its my newest poem.... i hope you will like it. Tum Hi Batao Mein Tum Ko Kiya Likhon, Kali Likhon, Phool Likhon, Kanwal Likhon, Ya Phir, Khushbu Ki Phool Se Wafa Likhon, Tum Hi Batao Mein Tum Ko Kiya Likhon, Chand Likhon, Chandni Likhon, Tara Likhon, Jugno Likhon Ya Phir Subho Ki Taza Hawa Likhon, Tum Hi Batao Mein Tum Ko Kiya Likhon, Badal Likhon, Barsat Likhon, Ghata Likhon, Barkha Likhon, Ya Phir Rangon Se Saji Kos-e-Qizah Likhon, Tum Hi Batao Mein Tum Ko Kiya Likhon, Sahil Likhon, Saghir Likhon, Moj Likhon, Leher Likhon, Ya Phir Seep Mein Band Koi Goher-e-Aala Likhon, Tum Hi Batao Mein Tum Ko Kiya Likhon, Saaz Likhon, Awaz Likhon, Geet Likhon, Sangeet Likhon, Ya Phir Kissi Gazal Ka Haseen Misra Likhon, Tum Hi Batao Mein Tum Ko Kiya Likhon, Heer Likhon, Sassi Likhon, Joli Likhon, Ya Phir Sohni Ki Wafa Likhon, Tum Hi Batao Mein Tum Ko Kiya Likhon, Bilakhir Tumhain Mein Bandgi Likhta Hon, Thehro! Tumhain Mein Apni Zindagi Likhta Hon,
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05-26-2007, 09:03 AM
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wa-alaikum-as-salam M.A. Natiq bhai, bohat achi nazm pesh ki hy aap ne, paRh kr acah laga, khaas kr nazm ka markazi khyaal umda hy... ager apko nagwar na guzry to ye kehna chahuN ga k abhi nazm meiN rwani ki kami mehsoos hoti hy, jo k musalsal practice se dur ho sakti hy... so, likhty raheN, aur ham se share krty raheN, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary.... khush raheN, aabad raheN...
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) |
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05-26-2007, 10:12 AM
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nice one...............
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05-26-2007, 10:53 AM
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ahannn v nice achi lagi apki khubsurat kavish likhti rahay ore ziada khubsurti aya gi 1.gif ")1") INSHALLAHbest of luck.. regards shazlayhasan
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05-26-2007, 12:11 PM
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Wah manatiq bhai ...zabardast (thumbup)..., buhut acha khayal pesh kiya hai aap ne apni iss nazm se ...... Faizan bhai ki baaton se istafaada haasil kijiye ... aor apne khoobsurat khayal aor bhi khoobsurat andaz mein hamare saath share kijiye HASDE WASDE RAWO
__________________ Jo Baatein Keh Nahii Sakta Unhein Main Farz Kerta Hoon Chalo Main Farz Kerta Hoon Mujhe Tum se Mohabbat Hai ... ! |
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05-28-2007, 10:31 AM
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Faizan Bai.....Nazam Ki Passandeedgi Ka Azhad Shukriya... Koshish Karoonga K ainda rawani ko mad-e-nazar rakhonga... pur khaloos dua'on ka buhat buhat shukriya.... |
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05-28-2007, 10:34 AM
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05-28-2007, 10:36 AM
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Nazam Ki Passandeedgi ka Azhad Shukriya....... May God Bless You In Every Feild of Life. |
~~.Tum Ko Main Kiya Likhon.~~ 
