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This is a discussion on ~*~TUM BHOOL GA'AY HO AB SHAYAD~*~ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; salam friends abhi kuch likha..to foran hi share karnay ka dil chaha... so...ghazal type kuch hai..share kiye daiti hoon /hbrk ...
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| salam friends abhi kuch likha..to foran hi share karnay ka dil chaha...so...ghazal type kuch hai..share kiye daiti hoon ![]() /hbrk TUM BHOOL GA'AY HO AB SHAYAD /hbrk woh din jo sang guzaray thay, tum bhool ga'ay ho ab shayad jab jagtay chand sitaray thay, tum bhool ga'ay ho ab shayad woh panchi jo hum dono ki chahat ke naghmay gaatay thay woh panchi kitnay piyaray thay, tum bhool ga'ay ho ab shayad duniya ke ghamon say door kahin, chota sa gharonda bana'ain gay kuch aisay khuwaab humaray thay, tum bhool ga'ay ho ab shayad tum jaan ho so bardasht kiya, warna to jigar ke paar huwe kuch aisay lafz tumharay thay, tum bhool ga'ay ho ab shayad jab ro ro kar mere aagay tum ne daman phailaya tha aur mere ishq ke maray thay, tum bhool ga'ay ho ab shayad ab dushman-e-jaaN tum kehtay ho un logon ko ay jan-e-jaaN jo kal takk jaan say piyaray thay, tum bhool ga'ay ho ab shayad MEHROO ka sath nibhanay ke jo waday jaan tumharay thay mujhe yaad hain woh jo saray thay, tum bhool ga'ay ho ab shayad /hbrk /hbrk /hbrk /ooho ...bas yehi aik adna c koshish ki hai yoonhi /oopz aap sab ki tanqeed-o-islaaah ka intazar rahay gaaa khush rahiye @};- Mehroo
__________________ ![]() . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! Last edited by kanch ki mehroo; 04-10-2005 at 12:42 AM. |
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yonhi lihkti rahoo ,, or haan har shair kay akhir main ho ab shayad kuch alag sa laag rahai kosish karoo kay shair ko tum bhool gaiey shayad par khatam kar doo .. ya mayri raiey hai .... zarori nahi u ko sahi lagay ...
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| MEHROO ka sath nibhanay ke jo waday jaan tumharay thay mujhe yaad hain woh jo saray thay, tum bhool ga'ay ho ab shayad mehroo /yhug bauhat hi achi kavish hai tumhari...khayal bhi khoob hai /rose khush raho ![]()
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| wahhhhhhhhh mahreen kia hii kahney lajawab likha@};- /clap5 @};- /clap5
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| Mehroo tanqeed ki gunjaish chorti hi kab ho k hum tanqeed kar sakain ![]() har har sher bohat acha hay bohat bohat daad qobool karo Khuda tala tum ko bohat bohat khush rakhey itni khushiyaan dey Khuda k daman tang par jay bohat khush raho hamesha ameen
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| wowwwwww mehroooooo /hug2 buhat hi behtreeeeeen ghazal hai/zabardast mashAllah /wah alwayz b happy n take care :flower
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#7
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| very nice jee ....khush rehiyee
__________________ ~~Main burron say lakh burra sahi...magar UNSAY hai mera Wasta~~ ..sry |