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This is a discussion on -=Teri Rooh Us Ki Aseer Hoi=- within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ~`Teri Rooh Us Ki Aseer Hoi`~ jab aankh mein tum rehne lage jab mein cheezein rakh ke bhoolne lagi jab ...
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| ~`Teri Rooh Us Ki Aseer Hoi`~ jab aankh mein tum rehne lage jab mein cheezein rakh ke bhoolne lagi jab dunia khali khali lagi geet jab zakhm daine lage jab sochon se ikhtayar gaye dard ne jab panjay gare mein ne taalna chaha bhi khud ko danta dapta bhi us billori si aankhun main darte darte jhanka bhi har baat ne mujh ko batlaya mera dil zor se chillaya teri rooh us ki aseer hoi...
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| arbi jee mujhe waisey shairi ka itna pata nahi ...per phir bi mujhe iss mein kuch kami si lag rahi hai.....rawangi nahi aa rahi...shaid mein galat bi hoon...phir bi...acha likha hai.. ![]()
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| haan wo to WT bata hi dein ge |
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| well written if you not mind please read the flowing link carefully it gave you great help to your poetry http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/urdu-...ls-137519.html
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| khud ko danta dapta bhi us billor si kacchi aankh main darte darte jhanka bhi har baat ne mujh ko batlaya mera dil zor se chillaya teri rooh us ki aseer hoi zabardust hai bus mashk kerti rahein is say b acha likhein gi ap sada khush rahein
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