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-=Teri Rooh Us Ki Aseer Hoi=-

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Old 05-31-2007, 12:11 PM
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~`Teri Rooh Us Ki Aseer Hoi`~





jab aankh mein tum rehne lage

jab mein cheezein rakh ke bhoolne lagi

jab dunia khali khali lagi

geet jab zakhm daine lage

jab sochon se ikhtayar gaye

dard ne jab panjay gare

mein ne taalna chaha bhi

khud ko danta dapta bhi

us billori si aankhun main

darte darte jhanka bhi

har baat ne mujh ko batlaya

mera dil zor se chillaya

teri rooh us ki aseer hoi...
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arbi jee mujhe waisey shairi ka itna pata nahi ...per phir bi mujhe iss mein kuch kami si lag rahi hai.....rawangi nahi aa rahi...shaid mein galat bi hoon...phir bi...acha likha hai..
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arbi jee mujhe waisey shairi ka itna pata nahi ...per phir bi mujhe iss mein kuch kami si lag rahi hai.....rawangi nahi aa rahi...shaid mein galat bi hoon...phir bi...acha likha hai..
haan is mein rawani nahi hai ye meine bina rawani k likhi hia jo mind mein ata gaya likhti gaee bad mein isko theek b nahi kiya aise hi rehne di qk mujhe aise thek lag rahi thi

pata nahi q
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haan is mein rawani nahi hai ye meine bina rawani k likhi hia jo mind mein ata gaya likhti gaee bad mein isko theek b nahi kiya aise hi rehne di qk mujhe aise thek lag rahi thi

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acha.....mujhe asa laga to keh diya khair phir bi ach likha hai......kuch aur logon kay remarks deekh lety hain
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acha.....mujhe asa laga to keh diya khair phir bi ach likha hai......kuch aur logon kay remarks deekh lety hain
haan wo to WT bata hi dein ge
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well written
if you not mind please read the flowing link carefully it gave you great help to your poetry
http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/urdu-...ls-137519.html
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khud ko danta dapta bhi

us billor si kacchi aankh main

darte darte jhanka bhi

har baat ne mujh ko batlaya

mera dil zor se chillaya

teri rooh us ki aseer hoi





zabardust hai bus mashk kerti rahein is say b acha likhein gi ap
sada khush rahein
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cool naqvi jee.....
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