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This is a discussion on *Teri Her Adaa Kay Saqay* within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Dil ji ... azaad nazam likhnay ki eik achi kawish hai .. kafi salihiyate'n hein aap main.. inn ko baroo-e-kaar ...
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#21
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| Dil ji ... azaad nazam likhnay ki eik achi kawish hai .. kafi salihiyate'n hein aap main.. inn ko baroo-e-kaar latay huye.. shairi safar jari rakhiye ga.. inshAllah bohat umdaah likhnay lagi gi.. bohat shukria.. @};- wafa aur dua ke saath withlove @};-
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#22
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| buhat khoob Dil kesi ho aap ... khush rahian hameeshaa Ameen
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#23
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#24
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Bohut shukriya pasand kernay ka /eflower/ .... Ji ana bus arsay baad hi howa hai per abhi ana jana laga rahay ga inshAllah |
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#25
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App ki ara'a ka bohut shukriya /eflower/ Salahiyato'n ka ilum to nahi hai mujhaye q kay ba'aqaidaa sikha kisi say nahi bus aisay hi kabhi kabhi lafzon say khail layti hoon. Aur ziada ter azaad nazmen hi likhti hoon ghazals kehna zara mushkil lagta hai. Aik baar phir bohut shukriya ![]() |
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#26
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Hum to 1st class hain janab app sunayen kaisi hain? Pasand kernay ka shukriya /eflower/ |
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#27
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| Salam Sis!What a melodious poem, khobsoorat rhythm aur flow. Aur "sadqay" aik desi tareeqa-i-tareef hai jissay tum ne khobsoorati se iss nazm main use kia hai. Allah karay berhay zor-i-kalam aur ziyada (ameen)Khush raho,Aatif
__________________ Mairi Unglee Pakkar Laina Mujhay Tanha Nahin Kerna Yeh Duniya Aik Maila Hai Tumhain Khonay se Derta HooN (Aatif Saeed) |
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#28
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DekhaiN koi bhii nazam, ruba'ee, qita, ya ghazal bardaaSht naheiN balkay paRhee jaatii hai ... Aur paRhne k baad usay pasand bhii kerna chahiay her kisi ko kyuN.k sha'ir ne mehnat kee hai ... Albatta her kisi k likhnay k mayaar meN farq hota hai ... Aap beher meN sher kehnay kii koShiSh kiya keraiN, aahista aahista uss per bhii giraft aa jaa'ayga ... Aap kii yeh nazam paRhne k baad yeh to andaazaa hogaya k khayaalaat k maamlay meN aap zar.Khez haiN, bas thoRii cee maShq kii zaroorat hai ![]() Achchha likhtii haiN, likhti rahiayga Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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