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Old 08-02-2005, 01:16 PM
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Dil ji ... azaad nazam likhnay ki eik achi kawish hai .. kafi salihiyate'n hein aap main.. inn ko baroo-e-kaar latay huye.. shairi safar jari rakhiye ga.. inshAllah bohat umdaah likhnay lagi gi.. bohat shukria.. @};-

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buhat khoob Dil

kesi ho aap ... khush rahian hameeshaa Ameen
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ap bardasht ki bat karti hain..aur yahan to itni haseeen nazm parh kar dil GARDEN GARDEN ho gaya....boohat khoooob...really superb......teri har ada ke sadqay

khush rahiye
App kay serahnay say mera dil b garden garden ho gaya hai /eflower/ thanks a lot
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ahaa...... bohot hi piyarii nazm.. arsay baad ana hua....aur tumhari nazm dekhii.... piyaari se zada khobsoorat lagii... bohot hi acha likha hai..... @};-

likhti rahoo.....jeti rahoo

Bohut shukriya pasand kernay ka /eflower/ .... Ji ana bus arsay baad hi howa hai per abhi ana jana laga rahay ga inshAllah
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Dil ji ... azaad nazam likhnay ki eik achi kawish hai .. kafi salihiyate'n hein aap main.. inn ko baroo-e-kaar latay huye.. shairi safar jari rakhiye ga.. inshAllah bohat umdaah likhnay lagi gi.. bohat shukria.. @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
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App ki ara'a ka bohut shukriya /eflower/ Salahiyato'n ka ilum to nahi hai mujhaye q kay ba'aqaidaa sikha kisi say nahi bus aisay hi kabhi kabhi lafzon say khail layti hoon. Aur ziada ter azaad nazmen hi likhti hoon ghazals kehna zara mushkil lagta hai. Aik baar phir bohut shukriya
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buhat khoob Dil

kesi ho aap ... khush rahian hameeshaa Ameen

Hum to 1st class hain janab app sunayen kaisi hain? Pasand kernay ka shukriya /eflower/
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Salam Sis!What a melodious poem, khobsoorat rhythm aur flow. Aur "sadqay" aik desi tareeqa-i-tareef hai jissay tum ne khobsoorati se iss nazm main use kia hai. Allah karay berhay zor-i-kalam aur ziyada (ameen)Khush raho,Aatif
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Salaamz Wa Rehmah!
Meray liyey alfaaz say khailna hamesha mushkil hi raha hai q kay meri urdu bus guzarey layik hi hai. Lekin mujhaye pata hai meri taba azmaii app sab bardasht ker layen gaye. Akhir ko pehlaye b kertay ayey hain. Here I go:


Teri Her Adaa Kay Sadqay

Teri jafa kay sadqay
Teri bey rukhi kay sadqay
Tera ruthnay say pehlaye
Khamshi say takna
Aur mananay sey pehlaye
Halka sa muskurana
Main kaisay bhul jaon?
Aye meray jaan-e-jana'an
Teri her adaa kay sadqay

Jisay bhula kay socha
Jisay gunvah kay mangaa
Bey hisaab chaha
Jisay her ghari hi dhunda
Woh ik teray ilawa
Koi dosra kahan hai?
Aye meray jaan-e-jana'an
Teri her adaa kay sadqay

Teri ankh ka ishara
Teray labon ki junbish
Tera piyar say yun takna
Tera bey wajha woh hunsana
Kiya kiya na yaad aye?
Aye meray jaan-e-jana'an
Teri her adaa kay sadqay

Kabhi kehna b jo chaha
Qaful per gaye labon per
Izhar kaisay kertay, iqraar kaisay kertay
Yahan kehna kiya asaan hai ?
Aye meray jaan-e-jana'an
Teri her adaa kay sadqay

Woh phool jaisi subhein
Woh khawab jaisi shaamein
Woh khamoshi main baatein
Woh jeet mein b maatein
Mujhaye yaad hain abhi tuk
Woh bey panaah chahtein
Saval ab yehi hai
Saraab kion howin woh?
Aye meray jaan-e-jana'an
Teri her adaa kay sadqay

*~~Farah Munawar Shah~~*

Aadaab O Tasleemaat: Farah Sahiba!

DekhaiN koi bhii nazam, ruba'ee, qita, ya ghazal bardaaSht naheiN balkay paRhee jaatii hai ... Aur paRhne k baad usay pasand bhii kerna chahiay her kisi ko kyuN.k sha'ir ne mehnat kee hai ...

Albatta her kisi k likhnay k mayaar meN farq hota hai ... Aap beher meN sher kehnay kii koShiSh kiya keraiN, aahista aahista uss per bhii giraft aa jaa'ayga ...

Aap kii yeh nazam paRhne k baad yeh to andaazaa hogaya k khayaalaat k maamlay meN aap zar.Khez haiN, bas thoRii cee maShq kii zaroorat hai

Achchha likhtii haiN, likhti rahiayga

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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