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RulesThis is a discussion on teri batoN meiN aa k dekh liya within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto! masroofiat k ba'is kam waqt k liay aana hota hy, so aap sab se ma'zrat khaw huN, aj ...
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#1
07-11-2007, 08:22 AM
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As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto! masroofiat k ba'is kam waqt k liay aana hota hy, so aap sab se ma'zrat khaw huN, aj aap se chand saal purani ghazal share kr raha huN, pata nahi aap ko kesi lagy, mager jesi bhi lagy, mujhy bta'iay ga zuroor,  ::: ::: ::: ::: ::: ::: teri batoN meiN aa k dekh liya, ji ko apny jalaa k dekh liya. shola-e-dil se ubhry naqsh us ka, jab bhi chaha jala k dekh liya. tu bhi wus'at meiN mujh se kam nikla, maiN ne tujh meiN sama k dekh liya. be-kali dil ki khatm hoti nahi, tera gham tak bhula k dekh liya. mutma'in is liay hy wo faizan, us ne bhi aazma k dekh liya. ::: ::: ::: ::: ::: ::: aap ki aara ka muntazir rahuN ga.
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07-11-2007, 08:39 AM
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اسلام و علیکم تو بھی وسعت میں مجھ سے کم نکلا میں نے تجھ میں سما کے دیھک لیا واہ واہ کیا بات ہے بہت عمدہ لکھا ہے آپ نے آخری تین شعر بہت اچھے ہیں اسی طرح لکھتے رہو
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07-11-2007, 08:42 AM
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As-salam-o-alaikum Faizan Ahmad Bro App ki chand saal purani ghazal Nice hai hum ko achi lagi hai. |
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07-11-2007, 09:59 AM
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shola-e-dil se ubhry naqsh us ka, jab bhi chaha jala k dekh liya..............wa hhh...khob shair hai ye...dad qabol karen...
__________________  Ab os k baad laga DiL to DiL lagi hogi Hum os pe apni mohabt tamaam kr aaye...!  |
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07-11-2007, 10:04 AM
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shoala-e-dil se ubhray naqsh uss ka jab bhi chaha jala ke dekh lia.. wahhh wahhhh.. Faizan sahib.. kuch saal pehlay bhi aap eik behtreen shayer thay.. jaan ker dili musarat huee.. kya hi umdah ghazal pesh ki.. mundarja bala shair ne apni giraft mein khoob lia..dhairo'n daad aap ki in behtreen adbi takhleeqat ki nazr..Bohat Nawazish  wafa aur dua ke saath withlove
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07-11-2007, 10:36 AM
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v nice wondering thought g purani ha to kya huwa likhi to apnay hi haina buhat achi lagi apki kavish,, all the best ,,
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07-11-2007, 10:46 AM
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Bohat umdaah Faizaan! Kia khob ghazal kahee hai. Traditional touch k saath, yeh sher tu bht hee aala hai tu bhi wus'at meiN mujh se kam nikla, maiN ne tujh meiN sama k dekh liya. Aur iss sher k misra e oola ko ager yun kero be-kali dil ki khatm hoti nahi, tera gham tak bhula k dekh liya. bay kali dil ki kamm nahin hoti tu kaisa hai? Bht khush raho
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07-11-2007, 12:00 PM
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tu bhi wasat main mujh se kam nikla maine tujh main sama ke dekh liya dheron daad is lajawab ghazal ke liye. 
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teri batoN meiN aa k dekh liya 
