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Tamaasha Keya Falak Dikhla Raha Hai!

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Old 04-22-2008, 08:47 PM
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Tamaasha keya falak dikhla raha hai!
Yaqeen aayaa naheen thaa,aa raha hai
Lahoo mein aa gai kitni safaidi!
Koi apna hi dil barma raha hai!!
Aqaarib mein bahut hai sard-mehri
Ragon mein khoon jamta jaa raha hai
Kisi ki yaad aai misl-e-khushbu
Koi phir kunj-e-dil mahka raha hai
Suno tum ghaur se,waadi mein koee
Mahabbat kaa taraana gaa raha hai
Yahaan insaan ke haathon hi aksar
Lahoo insaan kaa bahta raha hai
Chaman mein baaghbaan gulcheen bane hain
Huwa aei Phool aeisa baarhaa hai

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Old 04-22-2008, 10:27 PM
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hmm.true.....close to reality
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v nice................ ...........
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Chaman mein baaghbaan gulcheen bane hain
Huwa aei Phool aeisa baarhaa hai
bai wah
kia kamal ki bandash hay

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buhat umdha ishi tara laktay rahin aur hum say share kartay rahain
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HG aur PC maiN khush amdeed janab..

wahhh.. bohat hi umda aur dilkash andaz hai aapka.. bohat si dad qubool kijiye..

khush rahiye
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Peyare dosto
Meri ghazal pasand karne kaa bahut bahut shukriyaa
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Tamaasha keya falak dikhla raha hai!
Yaqeen aayaa naheen thaa,aa raha hai
Lahoo mein aa gai kitni safaidi!
Koi apna hi dil barma raha hai!!
Aqaarib mein bahut hai sard-mehri
Ragon mein khoon jamta jaa raha hai
Kisi ki yaad aai misl-e-khushbu
Koi phir kunj-e-dil mahka raha hai