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Old 03-04-2008, 02:43 AM
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woh chanad tha jo setaroun mein gher gaya
suraj ko deakho woh sumendar mein otar gaya

dalie se toota phool matie mein mil gaya
ansoo gera aankh se rooh mein otar gaya

mernay ke baad rooh to perwaaz ker gaie
jo daraad tha woh faza mein bekhar gaya

aasman ki wasatoun ka kia shumaar hai
neelgoun ghubaar negah mein thahar gaya

apnay zameer ko sar-e-bazaar beaach ker
insan khud apni nazaar hi mein ghier gaya

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dalie se toota phool matie mein mil gaya
ansoo gera aankh sa rooh mein otar gaya
very nice i liked it whole ghazal is very nice
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wha kia batt hi buhat umdha

ishi tara laktay raho aur share kartay raho
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nice sharing acha laga per kay /// bohat bohat daad qabool kerin

jahan rehin bohat bohatkhush rehin
bohat bohat ziada duon kay sath
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dalie se toota phool matie mein mil gaya
ansoo gera aankh sa rooh mein otar gaya
very nice i liked it whole ghazal is very nice
Sohail sahib app ki hoslahafzie ka bohat shukaria............ ..khush rahian
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Aap Nay Bouhat Khoob Ghazal Likhi Hay...Bouhat Si Daad Qubool Kijiye...Sada Khush Rahiye...
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AOA,

Dear Yasmin,

I'm Sorry but I'v One question in my mind about your's posted poetry, Is it yours own.???????
If yes...!!!!! I'm so much surprised from your ideas.

Please Don't mind but I'm realy amazed to see your collection of words.

"GEO"

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AOA,

Dear Yasmin,

I'm Sorry but I'v One question in my mind about your's posted poetry, Is it yours own.???????
If yes...!!!!! I'm so much surprised from your ideas.

Please Don't mind but I'm realy amazed to see your collection of words.

"GEO"

Frhan

jee haan ye solah aanay marie apni kavish hai lakin app ne ye to bataya dia ke app collection of words per to amazed ho gay lakin ghazal kaisi lagi mujeh app ke comments ka intazar rahay ga. Thanks aur khush rahian
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