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munawer · #21 03-24-2008, 06:10 PM

mohabat ka koi paymana nahi hota
mohabat ki koi jaanch nahi hoti
mobhat ek easas hai tu is ko naapna chod do
mohabat ek iqrar hai is ko jaanch na chod do

kush raho is eshas ke saat ke har ek ko kisi na kisi cheez se mohabat hai

take care

munawer · #22 03-24-2008, 06:11 PM

jawab ke jawab ka muntazar hu

**moinss** · #23 03-24-2008, 10:02 PM

wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah angel tum hare ghazal ke jitne taref karon kam hai yar har word dil ko choo giya really nice bohat he khubsorte hai likhe hai ghazal app na ase he post ka basabre sa intazar raha ga

**Aatif Saeed** · #24 03-25-2008, 05:18 AM

Bohat umdaah

Bohat pasand aai aap ki nazm

khush rehiya

**Aisha Baig** · #25 03-26-2008, 01:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zain

achhi nazam kahi aap ne angelhere saaheba,nazam main sab se achhi baat ,mazmoon ka tasalsul hai,jissey aap ne achhey andaaz main nibhaaya,so daad qabool kijiye,
albata rawaani ki tarf tawajah deney ki zaroorat hai,so..kuchh tawajah is tarf bhi ho jaaye ab,
bahot khush rahiye,likhti rahiye,

buhut nawazish or shukriya janab zain sahab

aap logon ki wajan sy himmat rahti hy hamari

**dua_e_sehar** · #26 03-26-2008, 05:57 PM

aachi nazam hai yeh b angle
khush raho

**Aisha Baig** · #27 03-28-2008, 01:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 'syed'

pretty good!

keep writing ..

thnx alot syed
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**Aisha Baig** · #28 03-29-2008, 07:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kanch ki mehroo

walikum asalam..

bhaee wahhhhhh.. nazm ka khayal to bohat hi khubsoorat hai.. andaz bhi bohat umda...

chalo sooraj ko dykhoo tum
batao kitni kirnain hain
batao kitna rooshan hy
batao kitni hiddat hy

wahhhh.. dilkash.. do lines maiN rawani ki kami mehsoos hui mujhe, unhaiN phir say daikh lijiye;

suno ik bat ooo pagul larky
kaheen pa rehm karthee hain, kaheen berehm ho jati hain

baqi sab bohat khoob..

khush rahiye

buhut nawazish mehroo g

agar aap ko achi lagi hy tou yaqinan achi hi hogi

buhut shukriya

khush rahiye

**Aisha Baig** · #29 04-04-2008, 10:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by saqib.sahili

bhuat hi achi nazam kahi. bhuat pasand Aya bhuat sari daad qabool kijiye

ek bar Aasman ki had dhoondh bhi logey shayad
per sunlo k mery mohabbat ki entiha na miley gi

buhut nawazish saqib g

**mnabaig** · #30 04-04-2008, 07:39 PM

buhut khoob
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