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Old 02-17-2008, 01:46 PM
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MUHABBAT KO NIBHANA HAI SUNU AB TUM CHALE AAO
SAHEY SADME BATANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

HAWA RUK RUK K TERE NAM K NAGHME SUNATI HAI
TUMHE BHI KUCH SUNANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

MAIN IN RASTOUN PE TERI DHOOL CHUNTI AAI HUN ABTAK
MUJHE MANZIL PE JANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO


TUMHARA HATH THAME IS ZAMANE MAIN SAMBHALNA THA
NA TANHA MAAT KHANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO


WO RATEIN WASL KI,MANZAR SABHI TERI JUDAI K
MUJHE SAB KUCH BHULANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO


JAFA K KHOF SE JIN KHWAHISHOUN NE ANKH BAND KARLI
INHEIN PHIR SE JAGANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO


MERA GHAR TOUR K AOUROUN K DIL ABAD KARTE HU
MERA DARPAN SAJANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO


MERI SANSEIN KAHIN DAMAN MERA AB CHOR NA JAIN
TUMHE MUJHO SULANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO


SUNO AAO TU MERA AKHRI DEEDAR HI KARLO
TALE MITTI DABANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO
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MUHABBAT KO NIBHANA HAI SUNU AB TUM CHALE AAO

SAHEY SADME BATANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

HAWA RUK RUK K TERE NAM K NAGHME SUNATI HAI
TUMHE BHI KUCH SUNANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

MAIN IN RASTOUN PE TERI DHOOL CHUNTI AAI HUN ABTAK
MUJHE MANZIL PE JANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

TUMHARA HATH THAME IS ZAMANE MAIN SAMBHALNA THA
NA TANHA MAAT KHANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

WO RATEIN WASL KI,MANZAR SABHI TERI JUDAI K
MUJHE SAB KUCH BHULANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

JAFA K KHOF SE JIN KHWAHISHOUN NE ANKH BAND KARLI
INHEIN PHIR SE JAGANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

MERA GHAR TOUR K AOUROUN K DIL ABAD KARTE HU
MERA DARPAN SAJANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

MERI SANSEIN KAHIN DAMAN MERA AB CHOR NA JAIN
TUMHE MUJHO SULANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

SUNO AAO TU MERA AKHRI DEEDAR HI KARLO

TALE MITTI DABANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO


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MAIN IN RASTOUN PE TERI DHOOL CHUNTI AAI HUN ABTAK
MUJHE MANZIL PE JANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO
wah....bohat khoob cute bohat piyaray khyalat isi trah
likhti raho khush raho aabad raho
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umda ghazal hai cute... aik bat ka khayal rakha kijiye.. k shair maiN tarz-e-takhatub same hona chahiye... bas is bat ko mad-e-nazar rakhtay huwe kuch tabdeeliyaN kar lijiye...

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hawa ruk ruk k tere nam k ngmey sunati hai,
tjhe bh kch sunana hai,suno ab tm chale aao.
buhab zabardust wording hai.
but jaane wale lote wapis aate kb hai?
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hawa ruk ruk k tere nam k ngmey sunati hai,
tjhe bh kch sunana hai,suno ab tm chale aao.
buhab zabardust wording hai.
but jaane wale lote wapis aate kb hai?
shukriya apka ghazal pasand karne ka aur kisi ka na loutne per aese jazbat janam lete hain jinko alfazoun main humne aplogoun se share kya aur is haqeqat se koi mun nahi pher sakta face karna hai,but phir bhi khush rahye yahi humare lye behter hai
apna khayal rakhyega
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umda ghazal hai cute... aik bat ka khayal rakha kijiye.. k shair maiN tarz-e-takhatub same hona chahiye... bas is bat ko mad-e-nazar rakhtay huwe kuch tabdeeliyaN kar lijiye...

khush rahiye
shukriya apka mehro lekin yeh tarz e takhatub kuch samajh nahi aya.koshish jari hai
apna khayal rakhyega
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MAIN IN RASTOUN PE TERI DHOOL CHUNTI AAI HUN ABTAK
MUJHE MANZIL PE JANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO
wah....bohat khoob cute bohat piyaray khyalat isi trah
likhti raho khush raho aabad raho
shukriya kanwal humko khushi hai k aap humari her kawish tawajja se parhti hain shukriya apka
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HAWA RUK RUK K TERE NAM K NAGHME SUNATI HAI
TUMHE BHI KUCH SUNANA HAI SUNO AB TUM CHALE AAO

Mashallah
kushi hoi yeh shair parh kar
aap ki shairi main boht behtari aati ja rahi hay
kush rahain or likhti rahain
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