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salam

umeed hay k app loog kheriat say hongay ..eid ki mubarik bhi hoo..abhi tak eid ka rang pheeka nahi hay kionk 4th day hay ..ye ghazal app logoon say share keraha hoon ..raye dijiyyaga



main tum say bicher ker nahi faryaad keroonga
ye bhool jaoo k main tumhay yaad keroonga

is shehr e baywafa main wafa ki qadr kahan
ab ja k main sehraoon ko abad keroonga

ger dil k taluq say hay inkar wo kerta
main rooh k rishtay say bhi azad keroonga

shayad khushi sakoon main rahat na mili hoo
gham day k apnay dil ko main ab shad keroonga

dil bhi udaas rah k ab ukta sa gia hay
ab to niya hi shughl main ijaad keroonga

hay mera zarf teri wafa say kahiin barh ker
ay baywafa tujhay main kion barbaad keroonga

tu bhi bichar gia hayye dil bhi udas hay
kis say biyaan apni main roodad keroonga





thanx ghazal app nay pointout kiya ..ye galat likha gia tha ..asal word azad tha..thanx again

Hamesha ki tarhan khoobsurat tahir sahib

khush rayeh (f)

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bohot khubsorati sey likhi gai gazal thanx for shairing tahir bhai

good one !

salaam tahir

well , gazal hamesha ki terha bahut khooobsoorat hey vv nice
AUR APP KO BHI BAHUT BAHUT EID MUBARAKKK
aur haan iss gazal mein mera ziker bhi tu baar baar aaya hey naa iss lia aur bhi ziada achi lagi ....heran hoo rahay hein kia khud hi tu baar baar app nay bewafa ki baat ki apni gazal mein /grin1
kidding naaa
take carezz
keep smilinggg
Allah hafizzz

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khush rayeh (f) [/b][/quote]
salam


bohoot shukria hamesha ki tarah hosla afzai kernay ka (f)




tahir

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salam



shukria sarosh app ka (f)




tahir

KAFI MATURE HAY APP KA QALAM

<!--QuoteBegin-sweet_butterfly+Nov 29 2003, 06:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sweet_butterfly @ Nov 29 2003, 06:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> good one ! [/b][/quote]


/luv