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[SOLVED] Dur kahein ik Khwaab nagur mein ... !!!

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Old 05-17-2004, 07:20 AM
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Ashiqaan dee lagee toar chardeee @};-

phir sey parhee


punjabi tao samjh nahi aayi /paseena


per ... hmmmmmmmmmmm .... /yhug
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wah wah kya kahne hain sis.... ghazab ki rawaani hay nazm main

bohat hi khoob surat nazm likhne pe dili mubarak baad

khush raheye likhti raheye

Shugufta jee ... /yhug .. merey likhey ko pasand kerne ka buhat shukeriya ... khear muabrak /yhug ...


hmm jee thnx for encouraging
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biyaaaaaaaaaaa jaani /hug2

hai oye kya baat ki hai tunai bauhat hi khubsurat likhi hai.........aapi nai bataya tha mujhe kai tunai kuch likha hai mujhe intezar tha is ka sachi loved it....kya gehrai hai /rose

khush raho aur yunhi acha acha likhti raho chanda /ilu and miss u /sad1

Diyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaa /yhug ....


haey oey ... yeh tao aapo0o kehti hein ... /khabardar.. chulo cheeti se yeh wapis lo .... hmmm haan awwwn .. thunku jaanu ... hmmm bas aise hi


tum bhi .. me too yaar.. mere paas net lug bhi gaya hai per raat ko online aati ho ..
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wah wah.........@};-

dobara se parhne ka dil chahaa....... bohot hi araam araam se parha...

aur bohot hi zada lutf ayaa.... @};-

wuh khwaab adhora hai ub tuk
wuh baat adhori hai ub tuk
kuch kehne k kuch sunne k
armaan adhore hein ab tuk

bohot acha likha hai Biya
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thnku Ansaaaa /yhug ...
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Its really sensational biya behna. Perh ker bohat acha laga.

Thanx for sharing,

Aatif

thnku Aitf bhai ... /rose .... hmmm

np
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wow.........@};-.

biyaaaaaaaaaaa...... .... bohot hi piyara....khosboorat likha.... bahtaren nazm hai...rawani ghazab ki.... khoob.... jaldi jaldi share kiya karoo samjhii.../hug1

:blush :blush


Jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... :blush ... hmmm thku shooney :* :* :* ... haan jub likhti hoon ke rleyti hoon share :blush ... ... /yhug ...
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wah wah.........@};-

dobara se parhne ka dil chahaa....... bohot hi araam araam se parha...

aur bohot hi zada lutf ayaa.... @};-

wuh khwaab adhora hai ub tuk
wuh baat adhori hai ub tuk
kuch kehne k kuch sunne k
armaan adhore hein ab tuk

bohot acha likha hai Biya


hmmmmmmm ... :blush :blush ... na ker yaar suchiii ... main ne bhaag jana hai :blush ...

hmmm ... thnku soo much ... /rose
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ASalaam-o-alikum !!! /rose

hmmm ... ... kaafi dinon se sooch rahi thi ju likha hai wuh share keron ... /paseena jub net nahi tha tao kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai ... Aapo0 ne meri buhat madud ki /rose ... :* aur inhoon ne mujeh encourage kya aur in se madud leyker main ne waqayi buhat kuch seekha bhi hai .. /yhug.. thnx aapo0o for being there.. lub shub you soo sara much ... /rose


Kush rahein /rose

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Dur kahien ik khwaab nagur mein
khwaab humare baste thay
un khwaabon mein kuch khwab thay aisay
saath buna hum kerte thay
neend se bojhul aankhien ik din
khwaab ko bunte bundh howien
wuh khwaab adhora chooth gaya
wuh khwaab bhi ub tao bhool gaya
wuh khwaab adhora hai ub tuk
wuh baat adhori hai ub tuk
kuch kehne k kuch sunne k
armaan adhore hein ab tuk
Wuh khwaab ju kul shub aaya tha
sandes apne sung laaya tha
kuch gum sum sa' kuch naadim sa
sung aik kahani laya tha
Main ne poocha "koun hai tu ?
kya os ne tujh ko bheaja hai ?
in neend se bojhul ankhoon pe
kya murhum rukhne aaya hai?
ab bole' bata aey khwaab tujhay
kiya poora wo ker paya hai ? "
wuh Khwaab bhi aik pujari tha
chup hi raha kuch bhi na kaha
wuh apne is khaali pun ko
undur hi undur maar gaya
ik talkh haqeequt ko jaisey
dil ne mere phir jaan liya
Wuh khwaabon ko bunney wala
ub khwaab udhera kerta hai
khwabon ki qudur ub na jaaney
adhora pun wuh na jaaney
wuh khwaab thukun mein choor sa tha
wuh khwaab bhi sub kuch haar gaya
os ik adhore khwaab ko tao
Atish k hawaley kerdala
Hum bhi tao sada se khaak hi thay
phir khaak mein hi mil jaeyingey
un khwabon ko un lumhoon ko
tunha jee ker mur jaeyingey
wuh khwaab bhi ub tao raakh howa
Dur kahein os khwaab nagur mein
ik khwaab ka aaj khoon howa

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main to tumhain kehti thi .....U have talant jab bhi likho gi kamal likho gi ab khud dekh lo .chigum


U deserve All this admiration /hug3

Keep it up .chips


/suno tareefain to main nay apnay hissay ki pehlay hi ker di hain na ....... ab dobara to nahin kerni

haan haan mujhay pata hai tum itni lalchi nahin ho /wink4
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