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<!--QuoteBegin-Shahzadi-e-Sehra+Sep 15 2003, 03:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Shahzadi-e-Sehra @ Sep 15 2003, 03:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <img src='http://www.eidmubarak.com/imageboxes/box99/i993517585036.GIF' border='0' alt='user posted image' /> [/b][/quote]
hg mein khush aamdeed,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,, @};- /flower @};-
wahhhhhhhhhhhhh bohut hi khoob ,bohut ummda,,,,,,,,,,, @};- /flower @};-

Salaam Shahzadi-e-Sehra !


Fist of All Wellcome here
bohat hi khoob
bari achhi Ghazal hai
baray achay Ash'ar hain, Kuch jagaah
shair out hain , zara unhain check kijye ga
shayad likhnay main Ghalati hui ho n don't mind

TAke care n Allah haafiz

Soft voice /piano

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WAH WAH WAH.... MAZA AA GAYA

BOHAT DINON BAAD ITNI ACHI SHAIRI NAZAR AAI

BOHAT KHOOB LIKHA HAI, KEEP IT UP

Hmmm achi hay.lakin ya jo Soft Voice sahab nay kaha hay Uss pay bhi ghour karein.Kuch garbar lag rahi hay.

<!--QuoteBegin-Soft voice+Sep 15 2003, 01:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Soft voice @ Sep 15 2003, 01:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Salaam Shahzadi-e-Sehra !


Fist of All Wellcome here
bohat hi khoob
bari achhi Ghazal hai
baray achay Ash'ar hain, Kuch jagaah
shair out hain , zara unhain check kijye ga
shayad likhnay main Ghalati hui ho n don't mind

TAke care n Allah haafiz

Soft voice /piano [/b][/quote]
W/salam soft voice

Thank you for welcoming me @};- and tahnks alot for pointing out some weak points of my ghazal.

Naii ji maiN bilkul Mind naii karti not at all apni poetry etc bhe issi liay share karti hooN takay issi tarha aap jaisay loagooN kay comments aur rehnumaii milaay mahz Wah Wah ya bouht khob sunnay kay liay nahii.Assi bateiN jo shir-o-adab kay hwalay say hooN aur un maiN kuch tanqeed kuch tareef hoo mujhay bouht pasand kunkay ghalti point out kiay baghaar sirf wah wah kah kar tu loag jan choratay heiN.

Aap ka bouht shukria aap nay parhee aur bouht acha mashwara dia.I am really tahnkful to you @};-

Aainda bhe apni Ray dati raheiN bouht shukria @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-shab-e-tanhaee+Sep 15 2003, 02:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (shab-e-tanhaee @ Sep 15 2003, 02:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Nice [/b][/quote]
Thanks shab-e-tanhaii @};-