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This is a discussion on sochoN pe jami gard ko dho deti hy barish within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-aalikum dosto! aaj Islamabad meiN kafi barish hui, kaei bateN yaad aaeiN, jin meiN se aik ye ghazal bhi hy, ...
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#1
04-02-2008, 12:04 PM
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As-salam-o-aalikum dosto! aaj Islamabad meiN kafi barish hui, kaei bateN yaad aaeiN, jin meiN se aik ye ghazal bhi hy, pehly is k 4 sheir hu'ay thy aur aap sab se share bhi ki thi, aaj is ghazal meiN mazeed 1 shier hua, aakhir meiN likha hai, aap bhi paRheN aur ra'ay se aagah kreN...  ==================== ========== aanchal teri yadoN ka bhigo deti hy barish sochoN pe jami gard ko dho deti hy barish hans hans k sunati hy jahaN bher k fasany pochuN tery bary meiN to ro deti hy barish yadoN ki mehak ho keh tery hijr k taa'ney chup chap maiN rakh leta huN,jo deti hy barish lagty haiN kisi aur hi duniya k manaazar hairat mery ehsaas ko wo deti hy barish mujh pr to jo krti hy so krti hy enayat, mooti tery baloN meiN piro deti hy barish ==================== ==========
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 04-02-2008 at 05:38 PM.         |
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#2
04-02-2008, 12:32 PM
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 Masha Alla bahut hi khoobsurat gazalkahi hai apne padne mai luft aa gaya |
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04-02-2008, 02:56 PM
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aanchal teri yadoN ka bhigo deti hy barish sochoN pe jami gard ko dho deti hy barish hans hans k sunati hy jahaN bher k fasany pochuN tery bary meiN to ro deti hy barish yadoN ki mehak ho keh tery hijr k taa'ney chup chap maiN rakh leta huN,jo deti hy barish lagty haiN kisi aur hi duniya k manaazar hairat mery ehsaas ko wo deti hy barish mujh pr to jo krti hy so krti hy enayat, mooti tery baloN meiN piro deti hy barish =================== bhuat khoob janab, kya khayalat hain or kya khoob lafzon main sajaya hai yadon ki mehak ho k tery hijr k taa'ney chup chap main rakh leta hon, jo deti hai baris mujh pr to jo krti hy so krti hy enayat, mooti tery baloN meiN piro deti hy barish ye shair to bhuat pasand aye, mazid kawish ka intezar rahey ga
__________________ ( Saqib Sahili ) Jo bhi hai magar kyun hai, ek bar bata dey Mery pas tery na hone ka koi to sabab ho |
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#4
04-02-2008, 03:04 PM
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bohat hi khoob faizan sahab bohat achi ghazal likhi hai aap ne isi tarha likhye aur share karye apna khayal rakhyega |
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#5
04-02-2008, 03:37 PM
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bohat khoob ...  |
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#6
04-02-2008, 10:29 PM
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buhat khoob ji.................. |
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#7
04-03-2008, 01:19 AM
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bohat zabardast........... ...daad ke saath bohat khush rahian |
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#8
04-04-2008, 07:07 PM
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gooooooooodddd one |
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#9
04-04-2008, 07:28 PM
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buhut khoob ................... |
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#10
04-05-2008, 06:25 AM
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Salam Nice................ ..... |
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sochoN pe jami gard ko dho deti hy barish 
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