Urdu Poetry Forum

**ignited_mind** · #11 02-24-2008, 06:48 PM

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Originally Posted by shazlay

hi igni hru?
1st of all apki koshish to buhat achi ha ore khiylat b v nice. per jaisa k haya or mahroo nay b apko bataya k bas thori si kamiya feel hui start mai qafia radeef ki try keray k gazal ko at a time complete keray ess say consertration rahti ha jes say ap ore b ziada khubsurat likh sakti ha selahiat to ha hi bas thora nikhar paida keray

wish u all the best dear ore keep sharing

i m fyn ... sis ... h r u .... aur u ho kahan aaj kal ?

Thnxzz

hmmm main apni poetry per zaada work nahin karti .. jo hota hai waisey hi share kar deti hoon

ab yeh to aap sab per hi k meri correction karein

Thnxzzzz dear

**ignited_mind** · #12 02-24-2008, 06:51 PM

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Originally Posted by primitive

aap kay khialat main jaan hay
magar technical kuch khamian hain

sangeedgi say tawaja dain to
aap aik achi shaira ban sakti hain
kush rahain or likhti rahin

thnxzzzz

tou me ko batayein na sari technical galtiyaan ....

sangeedgi .... agar is barey main sageeda hui to shayad likhna hi chor doun ...

thnxz once aagain ..

**ignited_mind** · #13 02-24-2008, 06:56 PM

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Originally Posted by dua_e_sehar

arey wah tum ne tu poetry ko bhi nahi baksha larki kisi k tu jaan chor de
mazaq bar taraf yaar waqeyi thoughts tu bohat aache hain mujhe bhi bohat pasand aye waise kya tumhare aapne hain
waise ager sanjeedgi se kosish karo tu bohat aacha likh sakti ho
khush raho

thnxzz ...

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