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This is a discussion on sara din, din k taaqub meiN chali aati rahi within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum dosto!!! aaj aap se aik ghazal share kr raha huN, umeed hy aap paRheN gy aur apni ra'ay se ...
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#1
05-05-2008, 09:44 PM
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As-salam-o-alaikum dosto!!! aaj aap se aik ghazal share kr raha huN, umeed hy aap paRheN gy aur apni ra'ay se nawazeN gy... to arz kiya hy:  sara din, din k taaqub meiN chali aati rahi, raat bher phir apny paoN sehlaati rahi. din musalsal tery gham ki sa'ataiN lata raha, raat sari qaafia paimaei meiN jati rahi. ishq ham ko ik gali aur aik der tak le gya, aql ham ko nit-na'ay rasty hi dikhlati rahi. ab kahaN aty haiN ansu ankh meiN, gham hoNt pr wo teri khawhish hi thi, jo in ko uksaati rahi maaN ki janib dekhty hi dekhty sab so ga'ay khali bertan se wo shab-bher in ko behlati rahi
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!!         |
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#2
05-05-2008, 10:59 PM
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laajaawab janab aap ki poetry tou waqai lajawaab |
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05-05-2008, 11:16 PM
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din musalsal tery gham ki sa'ataiN lata raha, raat sari qaafia paimaei meiN jati rahi. wah wah wah Faizan bhaee kia khobsoorat ghazal hai, sab ashaar hi umdaah hain amger iss sher ne tu bht mazah diya Khush rehiya 
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05-05-2008, 11:22 PM
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 Faizan bhai kya kehne haiN aap ke ... Bohot bohot bohot hee khoob maaN ki janib dekhty hi dekhty sab so ga'ay khali bertan se wo shab-bher in ko behlati rahi Aap ka ooper wala shair paRhker yeh shair yaad aa gaya mujhay: Jab khilonay ko tarasta hai koi ghurbat ka phool AaNsuoN ke saaz per bachay ko behlaatii hai maaN Qassim Mirza Ali :Qassim:
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05-05-2008, 11:53 PM
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wah......... zabardast........... .........akhari shair to kamal ka hai gurbat ki takleef ko bohat khubsurati se pesh kia hai.......... bohat se daad ke saath bohat khush rahian |
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05-06-2008, 04:41 AM
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 bahut zabardast Faizan bahi...aaj aap ki is kawish ki mukammal ghazal ki soorat me dekh kar or parh kar bahut acha laga...bahut khoob... khush rahen... |
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05-06-2008, 12:11 PM
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1.gif ")1") Allah Taala aapko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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#8
05-06-2008, 03:42 PM
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ishq ham ko ik gali aur aik der tak le gya, aql ham ko nit-na'ay rasty hi dikhlati rahi. very very nice. |
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#9
05-06-2008, 06:03 PM
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buhoot shandar....... |
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#10
05-07-2008, 09:51 PM
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Aatif bhai bohat bohat shukriya is khuloos aur mahabat k liay... Allah Taala aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya |
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