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sara din, din k taaqub meiN chali aati rahi

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Old 05-07-2008, 09:56 PM
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Faizan bhai kya kehne haiN aap ke ... Bohot bohot bohot hee khoob

maaN ki janib dekhty hi dekhty sab so ga'ay
khali bertan se wo shab-bher in ko behlati rahi

Aap ka ooper wala shair paRhker yeh shair yaad aa gaya mujhay:

Jab khilonay ko tarasta hai koi ghurbat ka phool
AaNsuoN ke saaz per bachay ko behlaatii hai maaN


Qassim Mirza Ali :Qassim:

wa-alaikum-as-salam Qasim bhai, is qadar pazeeraei aur hosla-afzaei ka bohat shukriya, kya umda sheir sunaya hy aap ne bhi... Allah Taala aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...

ye bat khush-aaeind hy k aap regular hoty nazer aa rahy haiN... hmaiN aap k comments k sath sath aap ka kalam bhi paRhna hy, so wo bhi regularly share krty raha kreN...
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wah......... zabardast........... .........akhari shair to kamal ka hai gurbat ki takleef ko bohat khubsurati se pesh kia hai.......... bohat se daad ke saath bohat khush rahian

Yasmin Shaiba itni hosla-afzaei aur pasandeedgi k liay be-had mamnun huN... Allah Taala aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...
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Wah janab...kia kehne hain....matlay ka to jawab hi nahin hai.....aur aakhri shair bhi bohot khoob kaha hai....poori ghazal ke liye dheron daad hazir-e-khidmat hai
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bahut zabardast Faizan bahi...aaj aap ki is kawish ki mukammal ghazal ki soorat me dekh kar or parh kar bahut acha laga...bahut khoob...
khush rahen...



bohat bohat shukriya Atif bhai, ji bas phir aakhir kar ye mukamal ho hi gaei.. aur aap sab se share kr di.. aap ko achi lagi is k liay bohat shukriya... khush raheN aabad raheN
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ishq ham ko ik gali aur aik der tak le gya,
aql ham ko nit-na'ay rasty hi dikhlati rahi.
very very nice.
bohat bohat shukriya Sohail bhai k ap ne meri ghazal ko sra'ha... khush raheN aabad raheN...
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buhoot shandar.......
pasandeedgi ka bohat bohat shukriya pices.... khush raheN aabad raheN....
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buhat khoob ..................
ghazal pasand krny ka boht shukriya khush raheN abad raheN
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Wah faizan bhai wah....... rat bhar phir rat apnay paon sehlati rahi....
boht umda
mera sms mila tha kia?
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