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Old 12-17-2007, 09:02 PM
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here is a poem for HG club. plz comments on it






<<<<<REEET ORE HATH>>>>>


Khab saree bikhar gayee heen


jo raat thi


woo dhal chuki

jo sham thi

wo ooter chuki

aab andheeraaa


Meree!!!!!


naseeb ka

wooo ujalaaa

subhooo qareeb ka ( subhooo=morning

wo kiya huwa?

kaheen khoo giyaa?


aab gayeee dinoo ka khumar heee


woo hi aas hee


woo hi piyaas heee


woo hi khab hee


woo hi reeet heee


woo hi hath heee


yoon khab saree bikhar gayeee


jo raat thi wo dhal gayeeee


baas ! reet hath meen reh gayeee






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please comments on this poem

nice poem. i like it
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here is a poem for HG club. plz comments on it






<<<<<REEET ORE HATH>>>>>


Khab saree bikhar gayee heen


jo raat thi


woo dhal chuki

jo sham thi

wo ooter chuki

aab andheeraaa


Meree!!!!!


naseeb ka

wooo ujalaaa

subhooo qareeb ka ( subhooo=morning

wo kiya huwa?

kaheen khoo giyaa?


aab gayeee dinoo ka khumar heee


woo hi aas hee


woo hi piyaas heee


woo hi khab hee


woo hi reeet heee


woo hi hath heee


yoon khab saree bikhar gayeee


jo raat thi wo dhal gayeeee


baas ! reet hath meen reh gayeee




thanks.............. ....................
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baas ! reet hath meen reh gayeee...
acha likha aap ne isi trah likhtay rahin khush rahin..
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EXCELENT .ORE YEE MISREE TU BUHOOT HI PASSAND AEEE

yoon khab saree bikhar gayeee


jo raat thi wo dhal gayeeee


baas ! reet hath meen reh gayeee


MERI TARAF SEE DHEER SARI DAD KABOOL KIJYEEE ORE KHUSH RAHIYEEE
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