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**kanch ki mehroo** · #1 12-23-2006, 02:50 PM

is martaba muqabla-e-nazam goi ke liye jo unwan diya gaya tha...woh tha "Saal-e-no"...hum un sab sho'ra ke shukar guzar haiN jinhoN ne bharpoor tareeqay say muqablay maiN shirkat ki...aur apni khubsooorat tahareer hum sab ke sath share keeN...

jaisa ke aap sab ko ilm hai ke muqablay ke nataaij ka ailaan judges ke mushtarka faislay par mabni hoga...Judges say guzarish hai ke woh 31st December tak is thread maiN apne faislay say aagah karaiN...judges har nazam ko 1-10 tak marks daiNgay..aur aakhir maiN tamaam judges ke diye gaye marks ko jama kar ke hatmi nataaij ka ailaan kia jayega...

judges ke naam darj-e-zail haiN:

(Ankaboot, Aik Lamha, Kanch ki mehroo, Zain )

Evalutaion ka criteria yeh hai

Andaz-e-beyan (5 marks) (rawani, alfaz ka ista'amal, takhayyul)
mozu (5 marks)
total marks = 10
tamam judges k diye huway score ka ausat asal score hoga...

muqablay maiN shamil nazmaiN yeh haiN:

1: Wandering Thoughts

2: Kanwal Hussain

3: Filmsy

4: Shehr-e-wafa

khush rahiye
HG Administration

Note: Aap tamam sathiyoN se guzarish hay kay iss thread meiN post na kijiye... Judges k ilawa kisi bhi member ki post delete kerdi jaye gi...

**Aik Lamha** · #2 12-28-2006, 06:16 AM

Assalam-0-Alaikum;

Lijiye meiN hazir hooN apni marking k saath..... Tamam saathioN ko mubarak baaad itna acha acha share kernay per

waqt ki kami k bayes mein sirf marks hi dey sakooNga.. tafseeli tabsara kernay se qaasir hooN uss k liye meray manager ko m'af farmayeiN..

Kul marks = mazmoon + Takhayyal/rawani/andaz-i-bayaaN
1. Wandering Thoughts (Faizan)

Total marks = 5 + 3

2. Kanwal Hussain

Total Marks = 5 + 4.5

3. Flimsy
Aap ki shayeri mashAllah nikharti ja rahi hay

..... keep up the good work...

Total Marks = 5 + 2

4. Shehr-i-Wafa
Total Marks = 4 + 3

Aik dafa phir sub ko buhat buhat mubarakbaad... aur best of luck

**Ankaboot** · #3 12-30-2006, 05:14 AM

1. Wandering Thoughts

Total marks = 5 + 4

2. Kanwal Hussain

Total Marks = 5 + 4.5

3. Flimsy

Total Marks = 5 + 3

4. Shehr-i-Wafa
Total Marks = 3.5 + 3.5

**zain** · #4 12-30-2006, 05:09 PM

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,

Lijiye janaab main b haazir hoon,lekun afsos is baat ka hai ke bahot tafseel se comments naheen de paoon ga,sirf marking likh raha hoon,umeed hai ke aap mehsoos naheen karain ge,

1: Wandering Thoughts,........... .5+3.5= 8.5

2: Kanwal Hussain,............ .......5+4= 9

3: Filmsy,............. ..................5+ 3= 8
4: Shehr-e-wafa,............... .....3.5+ 3.5= 7

aek baar phir bahot ma.azarat ke waqt ki qillat ke baais tafseelan tabsara naheen kar paaya,umeed hai aap mehsoos naheen karain ge,
tamaam doston ki shirkat ka bahot shukriya ke jinhon ne apne khoobsurat kalaam se nawaaza,aor is muqaabaley ko kaamyaab banaaya,
bahot khush rahiye,
ALLAH NIGEHBAAN.

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