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Sunoo qasid
mera pyaam
Swe say Pk lay kay jana hai
nahien balkay meray qasid
waitoo!
post ticket to lagaye nahien

Salamzzz Lalizzz

umeed hai aap aghaz mein chordi gye SHURLEE say ghaBaznak bilkul nahien hoe hongi

Bay hadddddddd pali nazam likhti raho aur offlines kerti raho ;)

Buhaaaaat khush raho :hug

ab is say sabit huwa ke aap kitnay bhulakkar haiN ...koi bat nahiN uncle..burhapay maiN yehi hota hai /hah/

thanku so much na lala

khush rahiye
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muqaddar jinka sota hai....kabhi phir woh nahiN sotay

wahhh........

bohat achi nazam hai......

keep sharing
bohat shukriya Mani

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"tumhari jeet ki khatir...yeh baazi jis ne haari hai..
nahiN tum ho sakay uske....woh mar kar bhi tumhari hai..."
nahiN...balkay...mer e qaasid...
usay tum kuch nahiN kehna..!!

jaisa ke tumhe pehle bhi bata chuki hoo'n .. is nazm ke shayan-e-shan tareef kelie mere paas ilfaz nahi hai.. per phir bhi koshish kerti hoooo'n.

dil mai'n uter jane wali .balkay paywast ho jane wali , pur dard , nazm hai tumhare shahkaro'n mai'n eik aur izafa...

isi tarha likhti rahi to meri dairies jaldi jaldi khatam hone lagai'n gi... ... per dua hai k Khuda tumhare kalam mai'n isi tarha din ba din nikhar paida kerta rahe ..
aww..thanku so much na...Muhammad Jharna :haha

tum apni diaries bharti raho... ... aur khsh raho
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Nazm hay k marsiya hay... iss poem ko parh ker loug ro kioN jatay hein
khair mazaq bartaraf.. buhat hi zabardast kawish hay.. sub k sub itni ta'areef ker chukay heiN.. meiN kia kahooN.. laikin itna kahoonga k kisi bhi moqay per khayalaat ka tasalsul nahiN toota... aur jaisay aik k ba'ad aik khayal per qaari ko saath liye chalti rahi ye nazm... her her jaga jaisay ankhouN k samnay ghoomi..

buhat khoobsoorat... buhat khush rahiye...

laikin mujhay lafz chaharouN per subah hay.. pata nahiN sahi hay k ghalat.. laikin Chahaar Farsi ka lafz hay isski jama youN to nahiN banni chahiye..
dekhtay haiN aur koi kia kehta hay...
waisay yeh to meri ghalti hai, maiNe chaharoN ko nikal kar line bhi soch li thi...magar edit karna yad nahiN raha, jab maine 2nd line ki "si" wali mistake theek ki thi...tab isay bhi karna tha...par kartay huwe yad nahiN raha

aur bohat bohat shukriya pasand karnay ka

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Asslamo alikum Mehroo sab ne is kadar tumhari nazam ki
tareef ki k socha parh k dekhon akhir is main aisa haikiya magar jab parha to samjh aya k jis jis ne jo tareef
k alfaaz kahey woh to is nazam k liye bilkul thorey se
hain really mehroo yehnazam waqai tumhari ab tak
ki parhi gais hairi pe sabqat le gai kitni gehaari
and pukhta andaz aur dard hai tumhare likhey gay lafzon
main aik saman sa band deti ho aur mere khyal main ksi
shair ya shaira ki yahi haqeeqai pehchaan hai k woh apne
lafzon se hansa dey apney lafzon se rula dey thts a wonder full pem

walikum asalam....aur bohat bohat shukriya khatoon

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Meray Khudaya
Meri kuch samajh nahi araha hai k main kya kahon
kash main nay yeh nazam yahan office main kaam k doran na parhi hoti .....
aik ajeeb si kaifiat tari ho gai , phir kam main to dil laga nahin , is liey yehi nazam bar bar parhi aur her bar apni hateli ki pusht say ankhon main aye woh ashk ponchay jo haqiqat main is nazam ka hadiya thay.

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itni purkhuloos tareef ke liye bayhad shukar guzar hoN Samra...aur aapke aansuoN ke liye ma'zrat khaah...

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Bht khobsoorat kalam Mehru bachay.

Qasid ko urdu shairi main bht ehmiyaat hasil hai, go k aaj kal qasid ka rujhaan na honay k berabar hai mager aisi taraqee yafta daur main pichlay waqtooN ke mehak ne khob mazzah diya.

Nazm majmooee taur per bht khobsoorat aur perhnay walay ke tawaju tootnay nahin daiti. Aik rabt hai jo pehlay misray se aakhri misray takk hai. Aur derd kee jo kaifiyat tum ne biyaan kee uss ne dil ko bht udaas ker diya. Khasoosan yeh misray

usi boorhay shajar ke... sin raseeda say badan par tum

usi peepal ki chaaooN maiN...kisi masoom ke dil ne..kaii sapnay sajaye thay

muqaddar jinka sota hai....kabhi phir woh nahiN sotay


jahaN kuch pal jiye hum ne....jahaN par jan yeh waari

usay ji bhar ke takna tum....meri ankhoN maiN bhar laina

"tumhari jeet ki khatir...yeh baazi jis ne haari hai..
nahiN tum ho sakay uske....woh mar kar bhi tumhari hai..."


Jeeti raho aur Allah se dua hai k berhay zor e kalam aur ziyaada Ameen

Urs Bhaiyaa

thanku so much aati bhai....bayhad shukar guzar hooN aapki

bohat khush rahiye
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