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Old 10-16-2006, 08:38 AM
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Meray Khudaya
Meri kuch samajh nahi araha hai k main kya kahon
kash main nay yeh nazam yahan office main kaam k doran na parhi hoti .....
aik ajeeb si kaifiat tari ho gai , phir kam main to dil laga nahin , is liey yehi nazam bar bar parhi aur her bar apni hateli ki pusht say ankhon main aye woh ashk ponchay jo haqiqat main is nazam ka hadiya thay.

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Old 10-16-2006, 11:13 AM
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Bht khobsoorat kalam Mehru bachay.

Qasid ko urdu shairi main bht ehmiyaat hasil hai, go k aaj kal qasid ka rujhaan na honay k berabar hai mager aisi taraqee yafta daur main pichlay waqtooN ke mehak ne khob mazzah diya.

Nazm majmooee taur per bht khobsoorat aur perhnay walay ke tawaju tootnay nahin daiti. Aik rabt hai jo pehlay misray se aakhri misray takk hai. Aur derd kee jo kaifiyat tum ne biyaan kee uss ne dil ko bht udaas ker diya. Khasoosan yeh misray

usi boorhay shajar ke... sin raseeda say badan par tum

usi peepal ki chaaooN maiN...kisi masoom ke dil ne..kaii sapnay sajaye thay

muqaddar jinka sota hai....kabhi phir woh nahiN sotay


jahaN kuch pal jiye hum ne....jahaN par jan yeh waari

usay ji bhar ke takna tum....meri ankhoN maiN bhar laina

"tumhari jeet ki khatir...yeh baazi jis ne haari hai..
nahiN tum ho sakay uske....woh mar kar bhi tumhari hai..."



Jeeti raho aur Allah se dua hai k berhay zor e kalam aur ziyaada Ameen

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aik nazam paish-e-khidmat hai...
apni aara say zaroor nawaziye ga ...
khush rahiye @};-


suno ke raigzaar-e-umr ka yeh aakhri zarra
meri bay jaN hathaili say...phisalta ja raha hai ab
meri guzri musafat ki thakan ab ood aai hai
mere qasid...suno..janay say pehlay itna kehna hai
mere ujary shehar ke un gali koochoN maiN jao to
jahaN bachpan bitaya tha...jahaN sab kuch ganwaya tha
to us weeran khandar ko..payaam-e-aakhri daina
waheeN aangan maiN dayeN hath pe...ik pairr daikho gay
usi boorhay shajar ke... sin raseeda say badan par tum
mere bay rang hathoN ki lakeeroN ki tarha...ik jaal daikho gay
usi peepal ki chaaooN maiN...kisi masoom ke dil ne..kaii sapnay sajaye thay
kisi ki aankh ke aansu...kisi dil ne bahaaye thay
kisi ki jheel ankhoN ne...kaii saagar lutaye thay
bohat narmi say us peepal ko chu kar..itna keh daina
ke ab aankhoN ke yeh darya...kahiN saagar nahiN rotay
muqaddar jinka sota hai....kabhi phir woh nahiN sotay
usay kehna mere qasid..!
jinhoN ne umr sari teri chaooN maiN basar kar di
woh aakhir pal tumharay pas aa kar..kuch na keh paye
lipat kar tum say ro laiN gay..agar duniya maiN reh paaye
suno qaasid..!!
wahaN say chand qadam ke faslay par...aik chokhat hai
wohi chokhat hai yeh piyaray...
jahaN sajday kiye hum ne...jahaN par zindagi haari
jahaN kuch pal jiye hum ne....jahaN par jan yeh waari
jawaaN margi pe meri shehr yeh maatam kunaaN hoga
magar...us aik chokhat par...ajab sa hi samaaN hoga..
wahaN raqsaaN sabhi chehroN pe kuch ra'aniyaaN hoNgi
wahaN bajti chaharoN su...bohat shehnaiyaN hoNgi
wahaN jiski nazar maiN jeet janay ki thakawat ho
magar...us dil nasheeN chehray pe..gehri muskurahat ho
samajh laina mere qaasid...yehi qatil mera thehra..!
meri aankhaiN yeh lay jao...mera yeh kaam kar daina
usay ji bhar ke takna tum....meri ankhoN maiN bhar laina
usay chupke say keh daina...
"tumhari jeet ki khatir...yeh baazi jis ne haari hai..
nahiN tum ho sakay uske....woh mar kar bhi tumhari hai..."
nahiN...balkay...mer e qaasid...
usay tum kuch nahiN kehna..!!

Mehroo~
wahaN say chand qadam ke faslay par...

aik chokhat hai

wohi chokhat hai yeh piyaray...


jahaN sajday kiye hum ne...jahaN par zindagi haari

jahaN kuch pal jiye hum ne....jahaN par jan yeh waari..........shand aaaaaaaaaar zaberdast@};-
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Old 10-17-2006, 05:54 AM
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nahiN tum ho sakay uske....woh mar kar bhi tumhari hai..."
nahiN...balkay...mer e qaasid...
usay tum kuch nahiN kehna..!!

wah .. bohat khoobsoorat nazam kahi hay Mehro ...Zabardast
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Old 10-17-2006, 01:48 PM
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behad haseen nazam kahi mehroo
likhti rahein khush rahen@};-
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Old 10-17-2006, 04:40 PM
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walikum asalam.

janab sab say pehlay to HG maiN welkom @};-

meri nazam apko pasand aai...bohat shukar guzar hooN..umeed hai aainda bhi aatay rahaiN gay

khush rahiye
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Old 10-17-2006, 04:43 PM
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Main yeh nazam paher ker kiya mehsoos ker rahi hoon alfaaz main batana bay hud mushkil hai aik bay hud dilnasheen nazam kahi hai Mehroo Sis .

Alfaaz ka chunao, biyan main ravani aur aik bhar pur khiyaal .....kiya kehnay hain kasmaye @};-

Kabhi kabhi share kerti hain magar bohut khub kerti hain
Khuda karey zor-e-qalum aur ziada @};- Ameen@};-

Khush Rahiyea Abaad Rahiyea @};- aur itna khubsurat likh likh ker share kerti rahiyea
walikum asalam@};-

bohattt bohat shukriya Dil....thx alot na

bohat khush raho
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