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This is a discussion on ~*~ Raigzaar-e-Umr....!! ~*~ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; excellennttttttttttt tttttttt hai har line ander tak utarti hai......completeeee ee... bohat hi zaberdasttt /hug/ tujhey pata hai na meko tareef ...
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| excellennttttttttttt tttttttt hai har line ander tak utarti hai......completeeee ee... bohat hi zaberdasttt /hug/ tujhey pata hai na meko tareef kerni mushkil lagti hai...sach abhi bhi me pass alfaz hi nahi hain ke achi wali tareef keron..........teri yey nazm pehlay bhi kai baar perhi aur abb fir perh ker aur specially desiging ke baad bohat hi maza aya...........excell ent workk me ki ladu rani bohat zaberdast ......
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#12
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| +(( Mehroo Ji Mujh Say To Bardasht Nahi Huwa Aur Mai'n Ro Hi Pari Yaqeen Kijiye Kay Aik Aik Lafz Mairay Dil Mai'n Utar Gaya Khataak Khataak Kar Kay Lafz Dil Par Lagtay Rahay Masha Allah Kis Qadar Umda Likhti Hai'n Aap Dil Ki Gehraai Say Is Haseen Takhleeq Par Daad Qubool Kijiye.... Mujhay Nazm Boooooooouhat Pasand Aai... ![]()
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#15
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bht umdah........Parward igaar aapko khshyaan den aur kalam me nikhar den Ameen
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| Sunoo qasid mera pyaam Swe say Pk lay kay jana hai nahien balkay meray qasid waitoo! post ticket to lagaye nahien ![]() Salamzzz Lalizzz umeed hai aap aghaz mein chordi gye SHURLEE say ghaBaznak bilkul nahien hoe hongi ![]() Bay hadddddddd pali nazam likhti raho aur offlines kerti raho ;) Buhaaaaat khush raho :hug
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#17
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| muqaddar jinka sota hai....kabhi phir woh nahiN sotay wahhh........ bohat achi nazam hai...... keep sharing
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#18
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| "tumhari jeet ki khatir...yeh baazi jis ne haari hai.. nahiN tum ho sakay uske....woh mar kar bhi tumhari hai..." nahiN...balkay...mer e qaasid... usay tum kuch nahiN kehna..!! jaisa ke tumhe pehle bhi bata chuki hoo'n .. is nazm ke shayan-e-shan tareef kelie mere paas ilfaz nahi hai.. per phir bhi koshish kerti hoooo'n. dil mai'n uter jane wali .balkay paywast ho jane wali , pur dard , nazm hai tumhare shahkaro'n mai'n eik aur izafa... isi tarha likhti rahi to meri dairies jaldi jaldi khatam hone lagai'n gi... ... per dua hai k Khuda tumhare kalam mai'n isi tarha din ba din nikhar paida kerta rahe ..
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