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This is a discussion on Raay-Shumari Baraay Tarahi GHazal Sep,05 within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As'salam O Alaikum, MAh-e September ki tarahi ghazal k leye Mohterma Parveen Shakir ka darj-e zail misra diya gaya tha ...
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#1
09-27-2005, 09:12 PM
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As'salam O Alaikum, MAh-e September ki tarahi ghazal k leye Mohterma Parveen Shakir ka darj-e zail misra diya gaya tha Dukh Humarey They, Muqadder Ho Gai is misrey pe jin jin shoa'ara nay apney kalaam muqabley k leye paish keye hum un k tah0e dill sey mamnoon hain 1.gif ")1") ...darj main muqabley main shamil shoa'ara k kalaam paish keye ja rahey hain .... aap ko jis shair ka kalaam uroos ki buniyaad pe mukammal lagey usey muntakhib kejeye koshish kejeye k zaati rawabit ko balaay taaq rakh k huqdar main huq main faisla keya jay Tarahi ghazal no-1 (ZAIN) --------------------------------------------------------jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye ashk aankhon ke,samandar ho gaye hon mubarak sukh tre tum ko sanam "dukh hamaare the,muqadar ho gaye" ki muhabbat to mila , ham ko sila khuab jo bhi the wo pathhar ho gaye ham ne socha to,magar samjhe na kuch gham mree taqdeer kiyoonkar ho gaye khaar to the khaar,ham ne NAZ gar phool bhi chhooye to khanjar ho gaye tarahi ghazal no-2 (FARHAN USMANI) Me Ne Dil Ki Baat Jab Tujh Se Kahi... ...Chand Taaray Sab Munawwar Ho Gaye... Har Khushi Tujh Ko Muyyasar Aa Gai... Aur, Gham Meray Muqaddar Ho Gaye... Tere Milnay Se Na Jane kiya Huwa... Dost Jitnay Thay Sitamgar Ho gaye... Tashnagi Teri Mitanay Ke Liye... Aankh ke Aansoo Samandar Ho Gaye... Ek Zara Sa Sach Hi To Me Ne Kaha... Kiya Huwa? Khamosh Kiyunkar Ho Gaye Logon Ki Baton Me Tum Bhi Aa Gaye... Tum Bhi Yun Badzan Sarasar Ho Gaye... Aaj Aisa Lag Raha Hai Janay Kiyun...? Tum Mere Kad Ke Barabar Ho Gaye... Teray Jaanay Se Faqat Itna Huwa... Aaj Hum Khud Ko Muyassar Ho Gaye... Kal Jo Mere Khoon Ki Taqseer Thay... Aaj Wo Hi Phool, Khanjar Ho Gaye... Aik Muddat Baad Jab Dekha Tumhein... Aisa Lagta Tha Ke Pathar Ho Gaye Teray Dil Ki Aabiyari Ke Liye.. Mere DiL Ke Khait Banjar Ho Gaye... Kal Talak Pehchanta Koi Na Tha... Aaj Se Hum Bhi Sukhanwar Ho Gaye... Wo Mere Dushman Thay Dushman Hi Rahay Tum Mere Apnay Thay, Kiyunkar Ho Gaye -----------------------------------------tarahi ghazal no-3 (QASIM MIRZA) Phool KaaNTe, haath Khanjar ho ga’ay Khair ho apne jafaagar ho ga’ay Kya falak bersaa’ay hai taazii Sharaab? Maikaday veeraan kyuNker ho ga’ay? Kee tasavvur meN tirii tasveer jab Raastay khud hii munawwar ho ga’ay Iss se baRhker aur kuch kehnaa naheiN “Dukh hamaare thay muqaddar ho ga’ay” Matlabii dunya kii rangat dekh lo Dost bhii duShman baraabar ho ga’ay ChhoRker jab se gayaa hamko tabeeb Naa.tawaaN, beemaar o laaGhar ho ga’ay Ishq meN girtay rahay ubhray naheiN Dard ka deevaan o daftar ho ga’ay Hai karam Maalik ka :Qassim: be.panaah MaShq se aSh’aar behter ho ga’ay ------------------------------------- tarahi ghazal no-4 ( SHABNAM REHMAN) -----------------------------------------------Jaadui jaisay woh manzar ho gaye murh ke dekha hum ne pather ho gaye tum jo badlay tou na janay kis tarah phool jitney the woh khanjar ho gaye kaisi ye barish hui ab ke baras khwaahishon ke khait banjar ho gaye sukh tou jaisay qarz the us ke magar dukh humaray the muqaddar ho gaye shabnami lahja ye kis ka sun liya jitney sehra the samunder ho gaye tum se mil ke kitnay arsay baad phir yun laga khud ko muyassar ho gaye Raay shumaari 30 September tak jaari rahey gi ........ aur nataij ka ailaan yakum October ko kya jaay ga. aap sey guzarish hai k zaati talouq daari sey bala tar ho kar faisla kejeye aur muntakib karda ghazal ki khobiyoo aur khamiyoo ka jaiza bhi paish kejeye bohat shukriya aap k tav'un ki mutamani HallaGulla Intazamiya
__________________ guzar hi jay gi terey baghair bhi laikin bohat udaas bohat sogwaar guzre gi Last edited by Shagufta Basit; 09-27-2005 at 09:14 PM.                 |
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#2
09-27-2005, 09:15 PM
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Salaams: Yeh waqaayi mushkil hai....khair....mujh e Zain ki likhi bohot pasand aayi... Tarahi ghazal no-1 (ZAIN) jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye ashk aankhon ke,samandar ho gaye hon mubarak sukh tre tum ko sanam "dukh hamaare the,muqadar ho gaye" ki muhabbat to mila , ham ko sila khuab jo bhi the wo pathhar ho gaye ham ne socha to,magar samjhe na kuch gham mree taqdeer kiyoonkar ho gaye khaar to the khaar,ham ne NAZ gar phool bhi chhooye to khanjar ho gaye Was'salaams |
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#3
09-27-2005, 09:28 PM
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Vote goes to Qasim Mirza @};-
__________________ Khawab Howay Azaab !! |
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#4
09-28-2005, 09:00 AM
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reason iska ye hey k bohat hi munfarid andaz main bayek waqt khudh kalami aur aur khitab karti hoi ghazal hey aur takhyul bhi munfarid hain sbahi @};-bohat baa kamal likha hey @};-
__________________ Kuch Aansoo Kuch KhushiyaaN Dey Kar Taal Gaya Jeevan Ka Ik Aur Sunehra Saal Gaya ...!! Meri Zaat Zarra E Bey NishaaN Mera Ishq Naghma E Bey Nawa |
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#5
09-28-2005, 04:00 PM
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bohat bawazan or munfarid poem hai yeh.  3 Usmani sahib keliye dheroon daad .
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#6
09-28-2005, 08:02 PM
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Vote For SHABNAM REHMAN @};-
__________________ ~~**~Ya ALLAH Hum Muslmano ko Dushmano Sai Azaadi Ata Farma~**~ |
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#7
09-28-2005, 09:02 PM
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bohat umda kalam perne ko mila. her ghazal mein chend sha'r aesa zaroor he jo perne wale ko apni taraf mutawaja kerta he. Beyaan ki khubsurti aor mozu ki gehraye ko peymana banayein to mere kheyal mein Shabnam ki ghazal dusaron se numayan ho ker samne aatii he. Agarche Ghazal mein sirf che hi ashaar hein leykin tamaam apni jaga khubsurat aor meyaari hein. Mera vote Shabnam Rehmaan K leye he. inam
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