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RulesThis is a discussion on Raay Shumari baraay Nazm Goi(March) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As'salam O ALaikum, is maah hum nay jo mozu diya tha nazm gopi k leye wo tha KHAMOOSHI... jis pe ...
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#1
03-29-2006, 04:45 PM
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As'salam O ALaikum, 1.gif ")1") is maah hum nay jo mozu diya tha nazm gopi k leye wo tha KHAMOOSHI... jis pe bohat sey shairoo nay apni apni khoobsurat nazmain paish keen.. jinhain parh k yaqeen janeye be-intaha khushi hoi ... aap logoo ka josh o jazba dekh k muqabley main shamil nazmain raay shumari k leye paish ki jaa rahi hain... aap logoo sey iltamaas hai k sirf aik nazm muntakhib kejeye aur saath saath muntakhib karne ki waja bhi bayaan kejeye ...nataij ka ailaan Yakum April ko ho ga bohat shukriya Hallagulla Intazamiya 1-Inam -------------------Baat Aadhurii Reh Jaane Do Baat JO Purii Ho jaaye Gii Baat Zarurii Reh jaaye Gii Harf Mukammal Ho jayein To Harf BeMaanii Ho jaate Hein Harf Aadhure Reh jaane Do Khamoshii Ko Bhi Kuch Kehne Do 2-Koi Yaad (Shumaiyla Hasan) ----------------------Buhat KHamoshi Se Kuch Log Duur Jaate Hain Palat Ke Dekhte Nahin Bas Aagey Barhtey Hue Woh Saari Baatein Saare Bikhre Hue Lamhon Ko Samet Jaate Hain Kuchh Iss Tarah Se Jaate Hue Ki Soochte Hue Phir Saansen Rukne Lagti Hain Woh Guzre Mah-o-Saal Kiss Tarah Se Beet Gayey Dharkanein Bhi Kuch Ese Theher Si Jaati Hain Ke Jese Dil Pe Ho Taari Ik Esa Sannata Ki Jis Ke Andar Kahin Gehri Khaamoshi Mein Bhi Sisikti Cheekhti Rehti Hon Jese Aawazen Buhat Si Baten An Kahi Buhat Se Lafz Khaamosh Buhat Sawaal Ke Jin Ke Jawaab Payey Nahin Buhat Si Cheezen Ki Jin Ka Koi Jawaaz Nahin Buhat Se Lamhey Ki Jin Ka Hisaab Baqi Ho Aur Iztraab Mein Lipti Hui Khaamosh Dua Kissii Tarah Se Kuch Lamhey Hi Haath Aa Jayen Bas Aik Baar, Aik Baar Rok Len Uss Ko Dua Ki Shiddato Mein Aankh Ki Nami Shaamil Ki Jese Saari Hayaat Aik Dua Mein Aajayey Magar Woh Jaatey Hue Log Ki Thehertey Nahin Dua Ki Shiddaton Se Bay Nayaaz Chalte Hue Buhat Ahistagi Se Girte Aanso'on Ko Bhi Buhat Khamoshi Se Kuch Log Chor Jaate Hain Buhat Kamoshi Se Kuch Log Duur Jaate Hain... 3-Slav3 yeh khamoshi bhi humari ana ka perda hai --------------------------sawal kertay rahoo or jawab rehnay doo safar ka sath hai yeh manziloon ka sath nahi guzar hi jain gay lamhay hisab rehnay doo 4-Ham wo sari an kahi bataiN -----------------------jinhaiN tum sunnay ki na'janay kab say muntazir ho kahoo to aaj keh dalooN magar is kay liye tum ko meray andar ki khamoshi ko toRna hoga bataoo aesa mumkin hay kahoo kya yooN bhi hota hay kabhi tm nay hawaooN ko fizaaoN ko baat kartay boltay suna hay nahiN na !!! magar dekhhoo wo kis tarah ham par asar andaaz hoti haiN hamari rooh kay andar kahiN chupkay say ras bas kar hamaiN shaadab karti haiN tum bhi meray is khamoshi ko meray andar hi rehnay doo meray jazbaat ko awr un sari an kahi batooN ko jaan loo yooN hi or apni rooh ko seraab karloo kay apnay pakiza jazbooN ko lafzooN ki zabaN dena meray liye mumkin na hoga 5-Raji  6-Aik Lamha  ----------------------------- 7-Aas Awan Khamoshi lufzoon pay raaj kerti hai ------------------------------jub lufz koi baat kahnay may nakaam ho jayain herf juzboon ki shiddat ko na bata payain tub ankhain bola kerti hain chup ki zubaan may wo sari batain hontoon say jin ka kahna mumkin na honay paye aur phir sunatay kay lahjay may kahee ik ik baat yakeen bun ker seedhi dil tuk uterti hai yeh such hai lakin kabhi kabhi kahmoshi lufzoon pay raaj kerti hai 8-Nageen YEH KHAMOSHI MUJH SE KEHTI HAI.TO AKSAR GUM SUM REHTI HAI SARE GHAM SEHTI HAI .PHIR BHI Q CHUP CHUP REHTI HAI NARAZ HO KAR BADAL SEY BAARISH KABHI BARASTI HAI ORA KEY PHOOL SE KHUSHBOO HAWA YOUN BHI CHALTI HAI JALA KAR SHAMA KO KABHI AAG BHI MACHALTI HAI ZINDAGI GUZAAR KAR UMR E AZEEZ BHI DHALTI HAI TOU CHUP CHUP Q REHTI HAI AUR SARE GHAM Q SEHTI HAI YE SUN KAR MAIN ROO PARI AUR BEKHUDI MAIN BOOL PARI K AYE KAASH KHAMOOSHI TERI BHI ZABAAN HOTI TOU TERI HAR DHADKAN MAIN MERI BAAT HOTI MAIN DIL HI DIL MAIN BAATEIN KARTI KYON K.......... NIGAHOO MAIN HAYA ZABAN PAR MOHRE KHAMOSHI RAKHTI HOON WAFAOO KE AANGAN MAIN TAMAM UMER HI JALTI HOON NA JANE KAWN THA WO SHAKHS K JIS KI RAH TAKTI HOON MUJHE MALOOM HAI K WO HARJAAI HAI PAR BHARAM AB BHI RAKHTI HOON PAR ZAMANE KI NAZROO SE WO SHAKHS HO GAYA OJHAL MERE AANKHOO SE BAN KAR PAANI BEHTA HAI JAL THAL DHARTI KI GOUD SE NIKAL KAR AASMAAN KE PEHLOO MAIN WO SHAKHS GAR LAAKH BHOOLANA CHAHOO PAR BHULANA NAHI SAHAL PHIR RAKH K PEHLOO MAIN KHAMOOSHI KO HAAN MAIN NE JEENA SEEKH LIYA HAI.... ZINDAGI KI TALKH RAHOO MAIN.... HAR DUKH SUKH SEHNA SEEKH LIYA HAI -------------------- 9-Umeed Koi bolo Koi tu bolo Kyun hay aisi khamoshi kaisi hay ya tanhai Rooh ki gehraiyon main utri hoi Dard ban kay jism main behti hoi Sorat e gham ankhon main phaili hoi kabhi shikwa kabhi anso ban kar Khamoshi karab ki sorat Wehshat dard ki maanind yon jaisay Zindagi dard ki banhon main simat aii hay Aik khamoshi hay jo rooh main dar aii hay koi bolo koi tu bolo -------------------------- 10-Jabeen_2004 Es Khamoshi Ko Kiya Name Doon Main ------------------------------Ya Khamoshi To Meri Sathi Hai Mujh Sey Meri Khamoshi Ka Sabab Na Pocho Meri Khamoshi Ko Tornay Ki Koshish Na Karo Ager Ya Khamoshi Tooti To Shyad Toot Kar Bekher Jayoon Gi Main 11-BilalinPK Terey sheher k log jantey hain ---------------------------------------mujhe darbadar karne ki rasm main tamashaiyoo.n main ik tu bhi thi aankhoo.n sey rawaa.n jis k anso they baal bhi bikhrey they merey baloo.n ki tarha zakhmoo sey choor tera badan bhi tha surkh dorey they aankhoo.n main kuch is tarha k janey kab sey roti rahi ho tum kisi ki yaad main, kisi k intazaar main chand chehra bhi tera murjhaya sa tha tooti choriyoo.n k zakhm bhi they gori kalaiyoo.n per teri kuch gehrey sey terey sheher k log jantey hain mujhe dar badar karne ki rasm main tamashaiyoo.n main ik tu bhi thi Suno Janaa.n! main terey leye tu khud ko ganwa sakta hoon main teri wafa per shaaki nahi hoon magar ik cheez jo mujhe jeeney nahi deti jis k jawab ka main aj bhi muntazir hoon mujhe dar badar karne ki rasm main terey hontoo.n per pheeli khamoshi hai
__________________ hai zindagi sey nibah mumkin!!!! Main zindagi sey nibha rahi hoon Hai us nay pocha udaas ho tum! main tunziya muskura rahi hoon Shagufta Basit                  |
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03-29-2006, 05:33 PM
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Well well well.... Main do nuzmon main khasa ulujha reha hoon....waise to baqi bhi achi hain mugur, mujhe Aik_Lamha aur Raji ki nuzmain bohot passand aayi hain... Aur mera Vote jata hai Raji ko....slightest margin se... Wejha-e-intikhaab...well...n uzum ki rawani...aur khiyaal....bohot khoobsooret... Best of luck.. |
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03-29-2006, 06:35 PM
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hmmmmmmmmm Raji wajah-e-intekhaab _______rawani or sooch ki gehrai
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03-30-2006, 12:50 PM
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Aik Lamha waja ....  ... wese to sab ne acha likha ... per mujhe sab se achi yehi lagi bas ... aur koi waja nahi ...  |
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#5
03-30-2006, 01:19 PM
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aik aur mushkil tareen faisla janab my vote goes to ...Aik lamah  Wajah k yeh mainay perhi thi kuch time pehlay aur kaafi socha tha is per ..shayad abhi tuk aser hai isliay aur nazmoon ka sehar girift main hi nahi lai raha hai All Da Best @};-
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#6
03-31-2006, 07:10 AM
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Asalaam Alaikum... sab se pehlay to tamam shu'araa ko bohot daad, unki takhleeqat bohot khobsorat... sab ko parh ke bohot lutf ayaa... choonkey vote aik hi ko dena hai so mayra vote Raji ki nazm "Khamshi" ko jata hai.... khayal'o zuban ki rawaani ..nazm ko bohot dil'faraib bana gaii.... @};- khush rahein....
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#7
03-31-2006, 07:36 PM
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sab ki kawish bahot zabardast hain magar mera vote Aik Lamha ki nazm ke liye........bahot khoobsurat andaaz aur jazbat ki gahrayi in ki nazm ki khasiyat lagi mujhay.......
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#8
03-31-2006, 09:38 PM
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Raay Shumari baraay Nazm Goi(March) 
TOTW/F/M Award(s): 1
