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Insha ji yeh faiz ha kis ka /thinking , kia ha us ka naam-o-maqaam
Ham tu rang tumhara jaanain, aasay kab ashaar kaho! /girlwink



:hug

<!--QuoteBegin-dreamingforu+Aug 22 2003, 12:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (dreamingforu @ Aug 22 2003, 12:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Insha ji yeh faiz ha kis ka /thinking , kia ha us ka naam-o-maqaam
Ham tu rang tumhara jaanain, aasay kab ashaar kaho! /girlwink



:hug [/b][/quote]
aap ko gila hai ke hum aap ke comments pe quote nahee kartey , janab aap ko khud hi maloom hai ke hum aap ke comments pe quote kiyun nahee kartey,,,, khush raho hazoor
With Lots of Love
Noman @};-

MEIN AUR TAREEF NAHIN KER RAHI HAHAH APKI HER POST ITNI ACHI HOTI HAI KE AB ALFAZ NAHIN MIL RAHE DHOODH LAOON PHIR KERTI HOON .
ZABERDAST HAI NOMAN JEE.

ALWAYS STAY HAPPY

bohot achhay noman bhai
really nice......... /weldone

buhat achche jee ! @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Aug 23 2003, 03:32 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Aug 23 2003, 03:32 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--><!--QuoteBegin-dreamingforu+Aug 22 2003, 12:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (dreamingforu @ Aug 22 2003, 12:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Insha ji yeh faiz ha kis ka /thinking , kia ha us ka naam-o-maqaam
Ham tu rang tumhara jaanain, aasay kab ashaar kaho! /girlwink



:hug [/b][/quote]
aap ko gila hai ke hum aap ke comments pe qoute nahee kartey , janab aap ko khud hi maloom hai ke hum aap ke comments pe qoute kiyun nahee kartey,,,, khush raho hazoor
With Lote of Love
Noman @};-[/b][/quote]
ss mujhay nahi maloom

kyun nahi kartay /sharmili

<!--QuoteBegin-sLeEpLeSs+Aug 20 2003, 10:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sLeEpLeSs @ Aug 20 2003, 10:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Very nice Noman sahib ... /weldone

Bohat acha likhtay hain aap ... /flower [/b][/quote]
/flower thanks alot for liking

<!--QuoteBegin-Noman+Aug 19 2003, 02:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Noman @ Aug 19 2003, 02:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->
Thorhi islaah ki hai ghazal mein, comments ka muntazir hoon.


Raat Bhar Merey Pehloo Mein Basera Kar Ke
Wo Ja Rahey Hain Ab Saweraa Kar Ke

Mujh Se Rooth Jaye Wo To Kuch Aisa Lagey
Chal Diya Ho Ghar mein Koi Andhera Kar ke

Roz Nikhaarta Hoon Mein Rooh Ko Apni
Terey Piyaar Ki Dhoop Se Sunehra Kar Ke

Mein Jana Bhi Gar Chahoon To Rok Leta Hai
Apni Adayun Ka Merey Chaar Soo Pehra Kar Ke

Roz Satatey Hain Aur Manatey Hain Tujhey
Saamney Apni Aankhon Ke Tera Chehra Kar Ke

Ajeeb Shakhs Hai Khushiyun Ka Jahan Dhoondta Hai
Apni Har Ek Khushi Ko Meraa Kar Ke

Mujhey Gawara Hai Phir Agar Maut Bhi Aa Jaye
Khushboyun Ke Sabhi Mausamon Ko Tera Kar Ke

@};- [/b][/quote]
/end

Ajeeb Shakhs Hai Khushiyun Ka Jahan Dhoondta Hai
Apni Har Ek Khushi Ko Meraa Kar Ke

buhat hi khoob noman
buhat achi ghazal kahi hai

regards

you have good idea behind the ghazal .its feeling is like a breeze except there is a slight prob with wazan .i can be wrong.any as far as other aspects are concerned it is good.