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This is a discussion on Qalam ko aab-e-baqa day.. to koi shair kahooN..! within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by ur_friend bht hi zaberdast shair bohat shukriya Zee.. khush raho...
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#21
02-15-2008, 09:48 PM
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1.gif ")1") khush raho
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#22
02-16-2008, 04:01 PM
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very nice mehroo appi bohat aacha likha aap ne bohat khush raho
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#23
02-17-2008, 01:52 PM
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asloob mein jiddat hai ashaar mein ( ko) tang karta hai matbadal talash kijiye aap ka qamar
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#24
02-21-2008, 06:43 AM
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wa-alaikum-as-salam KKM bohat si maazrat k reply meiN ta'kheir ho gaei, moaaf kiji'ye ga... baei bohat umda sheir kahy haiN, dono sher hi apni jaga khoob haiN. lekin matla k pehly misry ne to kya hi lutf diya, lekin mujhy hayrat hy k itni zerkhaiz zameen hony k bawajood aap ne sirf 2 hi sheir kahy haiN, qafia bhi sada aur aasan hy, ap se derkhawst hy k isy jald az jald ghazal ki shakl deN, aur ham se share kreN... khush rahen abad raheN, Allah taala aap ko is se bhi ziada ata kary....
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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#25
02-21-2008, 11:41 PM
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kanch ki mehro sahiba aap k ashaar perhay--bohat zaberdast khayal hai aur tareef perh ker ashar aur bhi achay lagnay lagay. aik jissarat ker raha hon umeed hai k tanqeed kernay ki ijazat ho gi aur bura nahi mana jaye ga k itni sari tareef main aik tanqeed bhi shamil honi chahiye jo kaha gaya hai k "qalam ko aab-e-baqa dai to koi shaair kahon" mean k shair deemagh se nahi kaha ja raha qalam se kaha ja raha hai jab k qalam se sirf likha jata hai aur agar baqa ki zaroorat hai to alfaz ko hai na k qalam ko us aab ki zaroorat k jis se likh ker baqa hasil ho jaye kiun k agar alfaz ko baqa mill jaye to phir shair ki baqa aap ho jaye gi umeed hai mairi baat ka bura na manain gi kiun k ye mairi naqis rae hai aur HG k itnay baray baray poets ki tareef k baad mujh ko lagta hai k shaid waqai naqis hi hai humaisha khush rahain amir muaan
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#26
02-29-2008, 08:20 PM
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khush rahiye
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#27
02-29-2008, 08:22 PM
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 waisay.. bohat bohat shukriya na 
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#28
02-29-2008, 08:23 PM
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khush rahiye
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#29
02-29-2008, 08:28 PM
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bohat shukriya Ather aapka... khush rahiye
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#30
02-29-2008, 08:31 PM
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khush rahiye
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Re: Qalam ko aab-e-baqa day.. to koi shair kahooN..! 
Mehroo Ji Aap Nay Hamaisha Ki Tarha Bouhat Umdagi Say Likha Hay...Parh Kar Lutf Aa Gaya...Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...Sada Khush Rahiye...