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Teray pyar ke liye main kiya kiya na kar gaya
Yahan tak ke main Zindagi ki hadh se guzar gaya

Mainay tujhay pyar ki aakhri hadh tak chaha
Is ke bawajood maira pyar mairay andar hi andar mar gaya

Najanay woh din kab aayee ga
Jab teri bhi aankhoon main maira pyar chalkaiyee ga

Koi mujhay batayee main tujhay itna pyar kyoon karta hoon
Sirf tujhay haan tujhay hi jaan dainay se kyoon darta hoon

Mujhay nahin pata keh main teray pyar ke iskabil bhi tha
Is liye mainay apni zindagi se kar liya hai samjhota

Tujhay na chahnay ki ab main koosish karoon ga
Halan ke ab shayad main pehlay se bhi ziyadah jaldi maroon ga.


If you want to experience the power of love then do it with someone who loves you too.

nice thoughts Samar ji!
bohot achi thoughts hain!!!

<!--QuoteBegin-Poison Girl+Sep 17 2003, 04:31 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Poison Girl @ Sep 17 2003, 04:31 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> nice thoughts Samar ji!
bohot achi thoughts hain!!! [/b][/quote]
Thanks a lot for appreciating me. I hope you like my other shairs too in future.

i hope this too. Was this your first try?

<!--QuoteBegin-Poison Girl+Sep 17 2003, 04:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Poison Girl @ Sep 17 2003, 04:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> i hope this too. Was this your first try? [/b][/quote]
Well no it was not my first try. I have written many shairs but not all people can understand it. If you go back in poet's and writters club then you will notice my other 3 shairs i wrote on Halla Gulla. I have some more but i am saving them for future but if you keep in touch with me then you will also read them and appreciate me.

ok well i hope i will be able to check them all. Actually i like your thoughts behind this poetry so i said i like your thinkings

nice jee

<!--QuoteBegin-Poison Girl+Sep 17 2003, 04:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Poison Girl @ Sep 17 2003, 04:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ok well i hope i will be able to check them all. Actually i like your thoughts behind this poetry so i said i like your thinkings [/b][/quote]
Well to be honest you can never know what i was thinking when i wrote that shair but thanks a lot for trying to understand it.

<!--QuoteBegin-sameer_khan+Sep 17 2003, 04:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sameer_khan @ Sep 17 2003, 04:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> nice jee [/b][/quote]
Thanks a lot

<!--QuoteBegin-Samar+Sep 17 2003, 06:31 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Samar @ Sep 17 2003, 06:31 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Teray pyar ke liye main kiya kiya na kar gaya
Yahan tak ke main Zindagi ki hadh se guzar gaya

Mainay tujhay pyar ki aakhri hadh tak chaha
Is ke bawajood maira pyar mairay andar hi andar mar gaya

Najanay woh din kab aayee ga
Jab teri bhi aankhoon main maira pyar chalkaiyee ga

Koi mujhay batayee main tujhay itna pyar kyoon karta hoon
Sirf tujhay haan tujhay hi jaan dainay se kyoon darta hoon

Mujhay nahin pata keh main teray pyar ke iskabil bhi tha
Is liye mainay apni zindagi se kar liya hai samjhota

Tujhay na chahnay ki ab main koosish karoon ga
Halan ke ab shayad main pehlay se bhi ziyadah jaldi maroon ga.


If you want to experience the power of love then do it with someone who loves you too. [/b][/quote]
nice effort samar bhai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,, @};- /flower @};-