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~~@~~Pucha hai mujhse mere paon ke chhalon ne,!!!!~~@~~

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Old 05-10-2006, 05:05 PM
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Pucha hai mujhse mere paon ke chhalon ne,

Kahan basa liya hai ghar dil me basne walon ne



Woh kahan honge,kaise honge,kis haal me honge,

Le li hai jaan meri in roz roz ke sawaalon ne.



Tum roothe mujhse toh roothe,lekin suno,

Chhoda nahi hai sath mera, tum, khalayon ne



Kya haal bana rakha hai apna,kuch dhyan karo,

Puchha hai mujhse ye shaher ke sabhi behalon ne



Ek tare ne chamkaya jo apne hisse ka aasmaan,

Toh bohat si ungliyan uthai phir jalne walon ne...


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salam doston:wave1

ek baar phir kafi arse

baad kuch peish karne ki gustakhi kar rahi hu
umeed hai pasand aaye...
aapki aara ki muntazir..
sab khush rahein..@};-

FameanALLAH..
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Old 05-10-2006, 09:24 PM
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nicely written!!
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nicely written!!
keep sharing
salam

bphat bohat shukriya jee.
inshallah share karti rahungi...
khush raho..
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hmmm ... acha likha
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bohat khoob janab
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Pucha hai mujhse mere paon ke chhalon ne,

Kahan basa liya hai ghar dil me basne walon ne



Woh kahan honge,kaise honge,kis haal me honge,

Le li hai jaan meri in roz roz ke sawaalon ne.



Tum roothe mujhse toh roothe,lekin suno,

Chhoda nahi hai sath mera, tum, khalayon ne



Kya haal bana rakha hai apna,kuch dhyan karo,

Puchha hai mujhse ye shaher ke sabhi behalon ne



Ek tare ne chamkaya jo apne hisse ka aasmaan,

Toh bohat si ungliyan uthai phir jalne walon ne...


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
salam doston:wave1

ek baar phir kafi arse

baad kuch peish karne ki gustakhi kar rahi hu
umeed hai pasand aaye...
aapki aara ki muntazir..
sab khush rahein..@};-

FameanALLAH..
salamz jee,

mashah ALLAH bohat khusbsurat andaz mai app nay ye ghazal likhi hian, parh kar bohat sari purani batein yaad aa gaee, zindagi mai buhat kuch hota hian, but sab achay k liye hota hian, yaha par app ka diya gaya har msg buhat acha laga, wese to app ki sari ghazal buhat achi hian but, ye shair hasil-e-ghazal hain............


Woh kahan honge,kaise honge,kis haal me honge,
Le li hai jaan meri in roz roz ke sawaalon ne.........


isi tara acha acha likhti rahiye or ham sab say share karti rahiye....

jeeti rahiye, buhat khush rahiye, sada hansti muskurati rahiye.....

ap ki duaaon ka talib............... .........










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nice .................... ........
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