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This is a discussion on Prem katha ka ant na koi.............!!! within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam'o'Alikum meri aik adna si koshish Aap ki nazar............:ro se adangel...
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| Assalam'o'Alikum meri aik adna si koshish ![]() Aap ki nazar............:ro se ![]() ![]() ![]() adangel![]() |
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#2
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| Wah ji wah.....is baar yaqeenan ek mukhtalif lab-o-lehja akhtiaar kia hai aap ne... magar andaaz ki dilnasheeni aur bayan ki asar aafreeni usi tarah munfarid hai....behad khubsoorat nazm likhne per dheron daad qubool kijye
__________________ ******************** ******************** **** Adaab teri bazm ke jeenay nahiN daitay DeewanoN ko jeenay ki tamanna to baRi hay (Qabil Ajmeri) |
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#3
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| Zabardast........... ..............
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#4
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| boht hi achi or khobsoort nazm thi kanwal,,or lagta hay kuch tajurba bhi kiya hay tum nay,, wesay main khud is baat ka qaail hon kay faarsi say ziyada hindi lafzoon main chashni or naghmagee n hay,,tumhari is nazm main taqreeban tamaam hindi kay alfaaz nazar aaiy,,kuch is waja say is ki soat boht achi hogae hay,,boht umda nazm thi kanwal,,,,is main aik lafz aaya hay``khabon`` ye chonkay faarsi ka hay,,or hindi main hamaray paas is ka mutbaadil lafz moajood hay``sapnooN`` agar khaboon ko sapnoon say tabdeel krlo to nazm yak rangi hojaiy gi,,aik do farsi kay lafz or bhi hain is nazm main, magr un ka acha mutbadil hamaray pas moajood nahi hay... boht saari daad kanwal hussain kay liye ![]() |
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#5
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| bhaut achey janab. bhuat kuch seakhne ko milta hai. plez keep sharing
__________________ ( Saqib Sahili ) Jo bhi hai magar kyun hai, ek bar bata dey Mery pas tery na hone ka koi to sabab ho |
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#6
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| very weldone appi bohat bohat hi payari aur dil ko chuti hoi nazam kahi hamesha ki taran bohat khush raho
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#7
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| buhut hi aala kanwal g aap ka tou jawab nahi main tou bus aap ki fan hoon i really like ur way of thinking ![]() :angel 1 |
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#8
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| wah bohat hi undah............... ..zabardast......... ..daad ke saath bohat khush raho |