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This is a discussion on Post for correction (poetry Contest Hamdard) within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; yahan aap saab sathiyoon ki contributions post kar rahi hoon.....plz agar koi ghalti reh gai hoo to post main bata ...
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#1
06-07-2004, 07:11 AM
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yahan aap saab sathiyoon ki contributions post kar rahi hoon.....plz agar koi ghalti reh gai hoo to post main bata dein... takay hum jald se jald isay voting ke liye paish kar sakein.... YEH POST 3 DIN KE LIYE STICK RAHEY GI.......PLZ JALD HI CORRECTION KAR DEIN...AGAR KOI HAI TO @};- khush rahein...@};-          
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06-07-2004, 10:09 AM
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Asalam o Alaikum Bohat shukriya Aaina jee @};- Kuch chooti chooti typos hain ho sakay tu unko darust kar lijiyeah ga @};- Pehla shair ka pehla misra kuch youn hai... Humdam, humdard, dost aur saathi, hein behlaway saaray Dosray shair ka dosra misraa kuch youn hai... Kis kay daman mein dalain hai jo Mun mein taray Mun = Dil Teesra shair youn hai.. Kurhna choorh kuch tu bool, kab tuk guzray gi aisay Mil jaye ga Yaheen kaheen, jo Mun ke leek sanwaray Aakhri shair kuch youn hai.. Kis sooch mein Gum baitha hai, janay walla kab aya hai.. Koi aisa jaam pilla saqi, phir yaad na us ki humain pukaray Bohat shukriya 1.gif ")1") |
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06-07-2004, 04:52 PM
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asslam o alaikum meri nazam main bahoot si galtiaan han .. chotay misre main " rang o bo sahar ( jis ka mtlab subah hota hai ) sham e safar nahe aur satwain 7 walay misre main " asaam " jis ka matalab " juram ( sin , crime) hota hai wo wala hai .. aur isi tarah jahaan jahaan asaam likha hai wo galat likha hoa hai aur atharwain 18 walay misre main .. zakhera hai matlab... storage jisay kehtay ahin wo hai .. baki sab nazam theek hai .. Allah hafiz
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#4
06-07-2004, 09:24 PM
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line # 10 mein hai AYE DARD KI GHATAAO |
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#5
06-08-2004, 06:08 AM
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Shukria..........cor rections ho gain hain ....@};- Hina apke PM ka intezar hai @};- |
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06-08-2004, 07:33 PM
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06-10-2004, 06:24 AM
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Corrections has been done........ thank u @};- aur main is post ko close kar rahi hoon @};- |
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Post for correction (Poetry Contest Hamdard) 
