Urdu Poetry Forum

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bohut khoob bahna @};- /flower @};-
wo humarey ik nazm sirey sey ghaib hey :blush /aw
aur nazmoon key naam bhee /cig /cig /cig
ho sakey to lagga deyna /thinking

Sweet Asmaa

AssalamoAlekum ..

jeee ek problem hai choti si

meri ek ghazal second wali jo hai uska last sher hai


Ab jaen to kahan jaen yeh ansoo meray
meri ankhon main hai jaisay thikana inka!

this is the end of this ghazal

and next one is

chashm-e-jana say baha hoga jo baytaab ansoo
apni palkon main chupa loon main wo nayab ansoo.

this is just a single shair ...
so can u please seperate it for me ?

Thanks alot ..

/hugs

Allah HAfiz

sab nay acha likha /clap
voting kab say ho rhai hai /jin

Walaikum Assalam!!

perfect jaani !! >:D<


Good Luck to all'ya Guys !! /flower

/flower

salaam
thx asma yar for this nice composition ........
meri poem tu sab sahi likhi hoi hey
thx and keep smilinggg
Allah hafiz

;D NICE WORK ASMA /flower