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This is a discussion on pholoon ki tamanaa thi mager khar milee heen within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; slam friends, ghazal pesh kar raha hoon. yee ghazal meen nee muqabla ghazal goi kee liyee likhi thi lakin ye ...
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01-13-2008, 07:01 PM
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slam friends, ghazal pesh kar raha hoon. yee ghazal meen nee muqabla ghazal goi kee liyee likhi thi lakin ye mujhe iss kabil nazar nahi aaee keh iss koo muqabla meen shamil karoon. thats why iss koo yahan pesh kar raha hoon. plz apnee comments zaror dijyee ga thanks GHAZAL --------- pholoon ki tamanaa thi mager khar milee heen yee nahi yad wo kis ke bahanee see milee heen sadyaan guzar gaeen unheen bewafa huwee!!!! kiyoon meri jafaoon se ab unn koo gilee heen aab jins-e-wafa hee na kaheen jins-e-muhabat hum jab bhi gaee band yee bazar milee heen parrde meen husan ke kabhi parrde meen ishq ke kiyon khar-e-muhabat lee ke aghyar milee heen ik aap keh pholoon ka jahan ap ki kismat!!!!!!! ik hum keh jinhen kantoon ke nazrane mile heen tamam hamsafroon nee pa li theen manzleen apni fareb mujh se muqadar ke har bar chalee heen hamaree bakhat bhi jageen ge nawaz ik rozz isee fareeb meen hum zindagi guzar chalee heen ye ghazal abhi net par jaldi see likhi thi. is sliyee iss meen ghaltiyaan bhi ho sakti heen. inshallah tomarrow meen iss ki durustagi kar doon ga Last edited by faridnawaz; 01-13-2008 at 07:16 PM.         |
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01-14-2008, 01:28 PM
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walikum asalam.. achi koshish hai... aap qafiya radeef ki janib tawajjah dijiye.. aur mashq jari rakhiye.. khush rahiye
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#3
01-15-2008, 11:19 AM
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achi koshish hai Farid saaheb,go ke abhi wazn/behar ki tarf khaasi tawajah deney ki zaroorat hai,mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye, 1.gif ")1") bahot khush rahiye,
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02-01-2008, 07:35 PM
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achhi gazal hai jenab keep posting
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02-03-2008, 08:09 AM
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bohat khub.......Fraid.... ........khush rahian |
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07-17-2008, 08:49 PM
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