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Phir Koi baat Mo'taber na huee

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Old 10-15-2008, 08:21 AM
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Shaeron ki mehfil meiN ek adna si nayee kawish....

arz kiya hay:

Derd ki Raat ki sahar na huee
Zindgi chain sey basar na huee

Jis gali mein ganwa di umr tamam
Wo gali teri reh guzar na huee

Kho diye jab tere hawaley sab
Phir koi baat mo’taber na huee

Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey
Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee

Lakh patkha junooN mein ser ham ney
Us ki deewar khul ke der na huee

Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN
Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee

Ek alam pe hay karam tera
KyuN mere hal pe nazar na huee

Sang tow they bohat sey raahoN mein
Aaj kyuN khatir-e Qamar na huee

( sher #4 ka pehla misra Faizan sahib ki inayat hay)

Adab

Qamar
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Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey
Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee

wah janaab, bahut umda.
likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye.
Zemir.
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Wah................. .....!!!!
its Amazing!!!!!!!!
Bohat He Khoob Kalaam!!!!!!!!!
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Buhat umda passions
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Kho diye jab tere hawaley sab
Phir koi baat mo’taber na huee

Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN
Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee

Wah janab wah....Qamar Bhai....kia hi umda aur khubsoorat ghazal kahi hai....khaas kar ke ooper ke do ash'aar to kamaal ke haiN....waqai ye sach hai ke jab manzil asaan hojaye to ham jaisoN ki khwahish-e-safar hi khatm hojati hai...kis umdagi se aap ne ek sachchai bayan ki hai....bohot si daad hazir-e-khidmat hai
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Manzil-e shauq jab hue aasaN
Phir hameN khawahishe safar na huee
wah wah Qamar ji kia he kehnay khas tour par ye shair to bar bar
parha.....dher sari dad qabol kijiye
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Ek ham haiN ke her khabar mein rahey
Ek tum ho jisey khabar na huee

wah janaab, bahut umda.
likhte rahiye aur khush rahiye.
Zemir.
Ghazal ki pasndeedgi aur itni achi daad ka shukria Owys saheb.

Khaksar

Qamar
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Wah................. .....!!!!
its Amazing!!!!!!!!
Bohat He Khoob Kalaam!!!!!!!!!
itni achi daad ke liye shukria soniaa jee

adab

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