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Old 11-07-2006, 11:05 AM
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dosto!

kafi arse bad hazir hua huN...
pichly kuch din se aik nazm ho rahi thi...

so ab ap se share krta huN....



aur itny achy image k li'ay maiN Nadeem Bhai (Mast Qalander) ka teh-e-dil se shukerguzar huN...

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taaliaN,
khushi k herf
muskurahatoN k phool
aur daad ka lehja...
kis khushi ka noha thy
jis py bain krty waqt
ashk jany kis jazby k tehat umad aa'ay
aur khabar faqat ye thi...
"aaj pehly insaaN ne...
zeena-e-zameeN pr se...
kaainat ki dehleez (chand) pr qadam rakha

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ap ki aa'ra ka sid'dat se intzar rahy ga...



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Old 11-07-2006, 11:12 AM
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Wah janab.. buhat hi khoob... aap ki shayad pehli nazm parhi hay meiN nay ... buhat hi ala'a...

likhtay rahiye Faizan bhai....
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Khayal-e-Nazm To Mujhay Bouhat Ziyada Pasand Aaya...Paihla Qadam Aap Ki Bila Shubah Bouhat Umda Nazm Hay...Is Mai'n Jo Aap Nay Jo Kuch Share Kiya Hay Us Nay Mujhay Bouhat Mutassir Kiya...Masha Allah Aap To Nazm Bhi Bouhat Umdagi Say Likhtay Hai'n Bouhat Si Daad Mairi Jaanib Say Qubool Kijiye... Image Bhi Bouhat Umda Hay
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Ahannn
Wah bhai jii Wahh
Buhat hi umdah nazam likhi hay app ne
Acha laga buhat app ki ye tehrer parh kar
Buhat si daad qabool kijiay hamari janib se
Khush Rahiay
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Default Re: Pehla Qadam...

simply amazing a cool poem on cool image ......... aab aap batain kah yah nazam pahlay likhi thi kah image say mutasar ho kar likhi gai Hay ?????
anyway buhat sari talian iss takleeq par
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very nice and difficult poem real magic word i real impress read it keep it continuced
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buhattt acha image ore nazam b buhat achi likhi ap nay likhtay raha kray ore share kertay raha keray ..
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Old 11-07-2006, 06:23 PM
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wahhhh...bohat hi alag sa mozu...aur bohat khubsoorat nazam...@};-

khush rahiye
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Bohaat he khooib likha hay aur jaissay mehro nay kaha bilkul different sa moozo hay...........
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