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RulesThis is a discussion on Pehla Qadam... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by WanderingThoughts dosto! kafi arse bad hazir hua huN... pichly kuch din se aik nazm ho rahi thi... ...
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11-08-2006, 07:41 PM
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 Bhai waah ... Khoob andaaz-e bayaaN hai ... Bohot hee aa'laa  Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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11-09-2006, 07:59 AM
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ji ye meri PC maiN pehli nazm hy aur meri life ki dusri nazm hy... bas shuru hi se ziada meelan ghazal ki taraf raha... ab pata nahi raasta kahaN le ja'ay... ap ne nazm pasand ki, ap ka bohat shukriya... Allah Mola ap ko khush rakhy....
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) |
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11-09-2006, 08:17 AM
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ye nazm to bas.... ho gai... pata nahi umdagi se hoi ya nahi... bas ho gai... aur image k li'ay to maiN waqai Nadeem bhai (Mast Qalander) ka bohat mashkoor huN... aik bat phir nazm pasand krny ka behad shukriya.. |
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11-09-2006, 08:24 AM
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Allah Mola ap ko khush rakhy... |
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11-09-2006, 08:32 AM
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chaleN ap ko bta hi deta huN k ye nazm kesy hoi... actually main aik english movie dekh raha tah with reference to Flight to the Moon, bas jab Neil Armstrong ne chand pr pehla qadam rakha to jo scenes Control room maiN dekhny ko mily, aur un Astronauts k gher waloN ki jo feelings us film maiN dikhai gai theN... there was something in their expressions that made me write these words... bas us k bad film to maiN na dekh saka, lekin subha tak aik adad nazm ho chuki thi, jo ap k samny pesh kr di.... itna sa background hy is poem ka. nazm pasand krny ka aik bar phir behad shukriya... |
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11-09-2006, 08:52 AM
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11-09-2006, 08:54 AM
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Allah Mola ap k bhi naseeb achy kary... aur ap donoN ko hmesha shaad-o-aabad rkahy... |
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11-09-2006, 08:56 AM
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Allah Mola ap ko bhi khush rakhy... |
Re: Pehla Qadam... 
... buhat hi ala'a... 
Khayal-e-Nazm To Mujhay Bouhat Ziyada Pasand Aaya...Paihla Qadam Aap Ki Bila Shubah Bouhat Umda Nazm Hay...Is Mai'n Jo Aap Nay Jo Kuch Share Kiya Hay Us Nay Mujhay Bouhat Mutassir Kiya...Masha Allah Aap To Nazm Bhi Bouhat Umdagi Say Likhtay Hai'n