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Old 06-27-2005, 09:10 AM
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Wo ayi thi
janey k liay
ik khawab ankhoon mein liay howay
bus
itna keh wo pai thi
mein chaldi hoon us khawab nager
keh
jis na koi manzil he or na he dager
mein chaldi hoon us khwab nager
mein hans di thi
keh
janti thi
wo lotay gi keh khawab nager k rustay mein
bus pather thay or kuch bhi nahi
bus kantay thay or kuch bhi nahi
bus ansoo thay or kuch bhi nahi
phir janay say pehlay
wo hans di thi
jo chamak thi us ki ankhoon mein
jo pehlay piyar ki kirnain theen
jo phaily thi rukhsaroon per
wo pehlay piyar ki khushian theen
mein ab bhi bhool na pai hoon
phir sadiyan guzari saloon ki terhan
ankhoon mein liay intizar diay
sahil per ab mein bethi thi
meray dil mein ik ass thi
keh
wo khush he ab na lotay gi
mein palti thi janay k liay
keh nazar pari ik larki per
wo meri janib ati thi
wo nikli thi sager say mager
ik piyar thi us k chehray per
ik piyar fakat ik mehfil ki
ik piyas thi us ki chahat ki
na ansoo thay ab ankhoon mein
na khwab nager ki roshanian
na pehlay pehlay piyar ki kirnain theen
na
pehlay piyar ki wo khushian
phir itna keh wo pai thi
mein loot ayi hoon khwaboon say
ab na jaon un rahoon pe
bus pathar tha khwabon ka nager
meray pehlay piyar ka pehla safer
lo
howa khatam is duniya per
ab na jaon in rahoon per
meray pehlay piyar ka pehlay safer lo howa khatam
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Old 06-27-2005, 10:27 AM
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Salam

Welcome to HG n Pets's Club

Apki nazam perdhi MASHAALLAH buhat khoobsorat khyaal aur flow bhe

Aisay he likhti rahiyay aur share kerti rahiyay

Have fun @ HG

Smile Always

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Old 06-27-2005, 01:03 PM
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Thanx 4 encouranging me shani g
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Old 06-27-2005, 01:06 PM
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Most welcome @};-
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na
pehlay piyar ki wo khushian
phir itna keh wo pai thi
mein loot ayi hoon khwaboon say
ab na jaon un rahoon pe
bus pathar tha khwabon ka nager
meray pehlay piyar ka pehla safer


Ashi ji.. @};- sab se pehlay to HG main boat sa warm /welcome1

HG main aap ki pehli post aur wo bhi eik bohat achi nazam ne bohat mutasir kiya... parwaaz batati hai ke uraan bohat oonchi ho gi .. aap ki nazam main kafi hadd tak rawani aur rabtt dekhnay main aayaa.. jo ke bohat hi khush ayend baat hai .. umeed hai aap yunhi acha acha likhti rahe'n gi aur share kerti rahe'n gi.. bohat shukria@};-
mazeed ka intazar rahay ga @};-


wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-
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Old 06-28-2005, 12:22 PM
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Bohot shukeria withlove (or kia bulaon)
meray liay duago rehiyeh ga
ap ki well wisher ashi ji
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Old 06-28-2005, 06:57 PM
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hmmm very nice jee .itz v. fantastic /zabardast
khush rahiye /rose
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Old 06-28-2005, 10:20 PM
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sab se pahle to ap ka HG par sawagat karte hain ashi ji /yhug
or ap ne kiya khub likha hian really very nice ashi ji
sada khush raho ashi ji /rose
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bohat khoob likha hai apne

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